Kangen - Ku Akan Datang
Kangen - Ku Akan Datang bercerita tentang sepasang suami istri pemanjat tebing. Mereka aktif dalam berbagai kegiatan pemanjatan di dalam dan luar negeri. Sang suami Prayoga, yang mendapat dukungan sponsor untuk melakukan pemanjatan di Amerika Serikat, berangkat bersama tim dalam suasana gembira.
Namun siapa yang dapat memprediksi segala sesuatu yang akan terjadi? Apa saja kejadian yang mereka akan hadapi di Amerika Serikat? Dapatkah mereka menyelesaikan dengan baik? Badai tornado di Shiprock dan pembajakan bandara internasional New York oleh sekelompok teroris dari kartel narkoba Meksiko tentu bukan hal yang mudah untuk dihadapi.
Untuk lebih mendeskripsikan situasi di dalam setting, cerita ini menggunakan tiga bahasa. Bahasa Indonesia, bahasa Inggris dan bahasa Spanyol. Para tokoh cerita berasal dari ketiga bangsa yang berbeda dan bahasa yang mereka pergunakan juga berbeda.
Terima kasih.
Salam.
Reveal Spoiler
Reveal Spoiler
Reveal Spoiler
Keep the story development, Author. It can help you to get some coins to raise the rankings. Keep maintaining the words per chapter so that you can get the total words amount. Shall we get next chapter, please? Thank you
Hope the author can accomplish the story in more than 40K words. To make it more than 40K words, the author can spread the settings or describe them In details. Enlarge the characters of actors for example. By the way, please continue the story, Author. Really curious the end. Thank you.
Nice story. I like the way of author exposes the intrigues among the actors. Some situation on settings which infiltrate the readers lead to imagine how the end will be. The author also clarifies each character of the actors. The imagination on readers' mind is describing what the top of conflict on the story. Good job, Author. Go ahead ...!
Reveal Spoiler
A new style of describing the story, compile the climbing technical to face the hurricane. Really like the Author's way to situate the setting when Prayoga, Rangga and Bisma start facing the tornado. It looks real and live. It helps me a lot to understand how to climb and the tools used in climbing. Go ahead, Author. You are my favorite one.
I like the languages used in this story. There are three languages in which the Author translates them so that the readers whom do not understand can follow. Perhaps the Author want to describe the setting situation according the way of people from where they are, like here. Continuing and finishing the story will be wonderful. [img=faceslap]
Nice story. I wonder how the story will end. Keep your writing spirit high, Author. I always follow the chapters posted since they make me curious about what will nest happen.
It is interesting to find the way of this story's author to describe the climbing. I can feel also the tense of sickness the actor expresses. I can follow the situation. Great story. Keep moving forward, Author!
According to the readers request to continue the story, hereby I post the next chapter. Please welcome the Kangen - Ku Akan Datang Chapter 19. Please submit your review and vote for the chapter. Really appreciate your presence. Thank you.
I am so curious the next situation on the setting of chapter 21st where the female character on this story has to get involved within the conflict. The Author probably puts the setting of the beginning conflict directly on high tension? Since it is directly high, can be good to speed the conflict. On my opinion. Good jod anyway, Author.
It looks the setting of chapter 21st needs repairing, Author. Raise the tension slowly until the plot of tension reaches the top. Still nice anyway but it will become stronger and strict if the actors flows naturally. Keep going, Author. I am awaiting the next. Thank you.
The chapter of 21st is what I await for. The conflict starts. Make the setting horrible and the readers will follow the situation as if it was real, Author.