Diana
Author: Mcintoshstar
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"To think- I'd die twice by betrayal."
"I'm sorry Diana, it had to be done."
"Just answer-me this." she coughed out.
"Was it you from the beginning?"
Her question was met by silence and a regretful as her vision then faded to black.
"Noooooo!" screamed Drakkon. "She will not die. Not again! You will pay!" he screamed
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There were some small but repetitive writing mistakes. The story seems easy to read, but make sure to read the story once or twice slowly, to notice when a phrase is confusing. The character design and world background are close to none, but I can't help but give 5 stars since there's not much you can add to a single chapter. I like the way you phrase the description. The chapter itself is pretty tiny, but this is just a personal opinion. Overall, the story is engaging and has potential. Keep up with good work!