I Bet My Heart On You

Great novel. I recommend it to anyone looking for a great slice of life story. Quality is important and this novel is impressive. Good luck author.

You have a very distinct and clear writing style. Your protagonist comes across as incredible sweet and empathetic, and your audience cannot resist becoming fond of her. The only odd bit can be your tenses and your punctuation. Examples: She had been brilliant ever since, she was a kid. (There should be no comma after (since’) …there will also be others who will become dear to her. (In this context, ‘will’ should be ‘would’) It was in late summer (there should be either no ‘in’ OR ‘in’ should be exchanged for ‘during’) Just to give a few examples. Overall, a charming story that captures the attention. Beautifully done!

An excellent story so far! I enjoy the interaction between all the characters. Four chapters so far, and I think it's really good! Can't wait to read more!

Hello and an honest review from me. I really like every character's name and it's so easy to pronounce them. Other than that, your plot story was great so keep it up author✨

Love the pacing, and the storyline. enjoyed the characters, their interactions and how they lived their everydays. there were some wildly placed commas but it doesn't affect reading much.

A really good writing skills 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Because it's only 4 chapter so far, I couldn't say much about the plot but, I enjoy Shiyi's character. I hope to have longer chapters please 🙈 The ML (is his name Jia Xin?) only shows up so I couldn't grasp his character yet

Nice and sweet plot l must say....l also like the teacher wang😂 Also the chemistry between the sisters... Although it too early go judge a book but still the concept is fresh and nice...l like it.... Keep going author and do upload a lot so that l can read more 🤭🤭

I swear I saw this novel having more than 56 chapters.... Anyway, I'll have to give it a five star this early, because I already like the first chapter. It really has an interesting start and progress, and I find the dialogues quite sweet sounding. I found only 1 punctuation mistake in the first chap, so... Amazing skills you have author!! Keep up the great work!!

This is a beautiful well paced, fast flowing like a river story, that simply carries the reader along. In fact the reader is delighted to be the debris caught in the power of this beautiful story. I enjoyed reading, savouring every moment like a delicacy. Well done author on dishing out such a compulsively gripping story.

This is serious, I love the book already and your writing style [img=recommend]