Till now it's all good going. Waiting for next episode. I am your first fan. Don't forget after getting famous dear. You are sure gonna rock EVA
3 years ago
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Aster_8459
Quite good as first timer. Story line is satisfying till now. But there are few poorly structured sentences in your story. Hope you will correct it. The best thing in your novel is your indulging story line. Hope you will update rest of chapters soon.
Till now it's all good going. Waiting for next episode. I am your first fan. Don't forget after getting famous dear. You are sure gonna rock EVA
Quite good as first timer. Story line is satisfying till now. But there are few poorly structured sentences in your story. Hope you will correct it. The best thing in your novel is your indulging story line. Hope you will update rest of chapters soon.