The shadow of dead.
It's the story of Ruhi's reincarnation, Ruhi a female offspring of a well-to-do family raised in New York City, whose parents died twelve years ago.
She currently resides in New York with her uncle. Ruhi is a news reporter, and in her work, she comes across an area where the unfinished story of her previous life is about to be completed in this life.
During her time in India, a boy named Siddharth collaborated with Ruhi on a historic project. Sidharth remains with her because he is madly in love with Ruhi. Nonetheless, Ruhi's love was someone else in reincarnation, which brought Ruhi dangerously close to death.
The Devil yells, "You're about to DIE; therefore, die peacefully."
"Please," Ruhi says, her hands folded, "Please excuse me, what went wrong?":((
"You are going to be punished for the sins of the previous life," the dreadful Devil said. "You may need to become mine, solely mine from heart, body, and soul."
What will Ruhi prefer, her reincarnation's love or Siddhartha's eternal love during this life? Finally, what is the truth about Ruhi's past? Who is Ruhi, and what is the significance of the location "Rani Ka Vav"?
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great concept with vivid details that allow one to get fully immersed into the story. The pacing seems appropriate for the length of the novel so far and I think it has huge potential!
fantastic story and good characters.....in this story I really like the novel recommended for others👌👌👌❤❤....and it's interesting....the description vivid and it's like you are dragged into the story as you read each line of the book..all in one novel...
The story is certainly unique. It gives off a different vibe from many I've read. If I'm correct then I believe it's somewhat intertwined with the Indian gods. I'll review step by step below: Synopsis: One of the best aspects of the book but I believe it contains just a little too much information. Add a few more sentences and it would look more like a prologue than a synopsis. You should keep this concise and to the point. Writing Quality: Honestly, the grammar is okay but the organization and punctuations are far from perfect. Sometimes you use quotations to dictate dialogue then sometimes you don't. That's very confusing. You should choose one of the two and stop moving between them. There was even an instance or two where you started sentences with quotations and the Hun the closing quotation is nowhere to be found. Story Development: One of the stronger points of this book. It has more of a slow build but that's fine if done correctly which I believe you have the skill to do. Overall: The author has potential and while it isn't a terrible book, there is still space for great improvement. The paragraphs were too crowded, punctuation usage could be better, and some parts were quite confusing. But don't give up. Fix these errors and your book could turn into a masterpiece. Good luck author!
I can say ,This is a Masterpiece .[img=recommend] Story development ,characters, writing styles and it hooked cover ...everything is superb 👌. Great work author.keep going.
Okay. So the story seemed to have an immersive plot, which is wonderful as it quickly draws you in. The one problem that draws you out of this immersive-ness would be the inappropriate use of punctuation and the lack of overall sentence blending. Everything else seems great so I'd be keeping an eye out for updates. If the author corrects the disjointed sentence problem then that would be even better.
While the premise is interesting, the author could improve more on grammar and sentence structures. I spotted many words that were merged together as an example. And a few dialogues got stuck in the same paragraph. I suggest you install Grammarly. It helps in constructing sentences and giving us suggestions. I only use the free version so the benefits are limited. With more practice, you can write better and better. Best of luck, author!
Your writing style is well-written which has its own uniqueness. Although you need to work on the punctuation and your grammar will improve some day. Don't give up and keep up the good work, author :)
The story is very charming, it hooks you and you keep waiting for more, I want to see what will happen, I like the characters, they have a touch that characterizes them.
nice story l must say.... uur ritting skill is also great.... keep going author... this story gonna lead you to a big success ... my best wishes is with u...
hello there. After going through the story, it became clear that is different from what I have read, in a good way because has a unique touch to it, it has relatable characters and that is a plus for me. The book has potential, some misplaced punctuation and grammar that can be fixed and but there is room for improvement, because this is a gem. I totally recommend people to read it.
You have one problem, which is grammar and your grasp at english is still weak 😉 Welp me too! Haha 😂 Continue to improve, the rest were okay and fine. Just keep reading and learning. Pacing is fine too and the story has potential. Characters are also very life-like. Keep it up and don't surrender 👍
The title is very intriguing ... and not to mention the plot development and flow of story . I'm loving as far as I read . A definitely recommended read for readers out here [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Your story is super good and I don't deny this truth. I love your writing style. Your plot is strong and the characters are well arranged. keep it up.
Great work author, interesting plot, I like how it's mysterious, and I can't wait to find out about the mystery behind the mansion, I just started reading and I can tell that this book has great potential, so keep up the good work author, you just need to correct a few things and you are good to go. I'm rooting for you🙌🙌
I can't explain how much obssesd with this novel.. I got the chill so many time during reading this novel...I completely blew my mind..the characters development and the story depth is amazing 👏 🙌 .......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]