Winter_Fox1

I'm writing the main plot/story of the videogame  "Twisted Wonderland". At first the plan was to also use it for something else but now I'm not sure I will. I'm using a female Yuu, although if you want the gender is changeable. This is not my own original work, all credits to Disney and those that helped make the game. So none of the characters, places, or the plot is my own writing. Do not think that, because I do not claim credits to this any major way, I am simply writing the story, places, characters, and characters actions in a novel form. Please give constructive criticism because I am only trying my best.

Written Twisted Wonderland

The screen then announces the name of the next chapter "Chapter - 4; Recollection Blanking"


They are now in the library they were in before, where the headmage had first found her. Although now it was a bit brighter and didn't have the same green hue as before.


The two are looking through books of geography and lands of Twisted Wonderland.


Crowley then shuts a book saying "Just as I'd suspected. Nothing. Not only is your homeland not listed on any map from any point in history." He's now suspicious of her as he asks "Now, are you QUITE sure that you come from such a place? That wasn't some sort of lie, or jape? Because if so, the only explanation is that you've come from another planet." As if saying that gave him an idea he continued with "Or perhaps you were summoned here from another dimension?" The girl is shocked and yells out the question "Another dimension?!"


The headmage is now less suspicious and more curious as he says "Show me everything that you brought here with you. Do you have some form of identification, a driver's license perhaps? Or even a...shoe?" Now looking closer at her he says "You do seem a tad bit…empty-handed." The girl then searches herself slightly as she says "Come to think of it, where's my wallet and phone?!" At first her voice was normal but it took a bit of a panicked, nervous tone towards the end.


Crowley then says "Well, this is quite the predicament. I cannot have someone with no aptitude for magic bumbling about my magic academy. And yet, as an educator, I am loath to expel a young person without a cent to their name, or any ability to contact their guardian…"He pauses, coming up with an idea "Truly, my grace is boundless."


He then pauses again, but this time on purpose to cause an effect "There is a vacant building on this campus. It was, in fact, used as a dorm a long time ago. With a proper cleaning, it should be habitable enough. Out of the profound kindness of my heart, I will allow you to live there for the time being. In the meantime, we will investigate other ways to send you home."


The girl brightens up as Crowley boasts himself more "Dear me, but I am a gracious man indeed! A model educator, one might say." He then gets down to business as he says "Well then, I shall take you to your dorm straight away. It is an older building, but it has plenty of…character, one might say."


The screen then goes black this time being shorter than all the others as it say "To be continued".


Prologue - Welcome to the Villain's World: Chapter 4; Recollection Blanking