Winter_Fox1

I'm writing the main plot/story of the videogame  "Twisted Wonderland". At first the plan was to also use it for something else but now I'm not sure I will. I'm using a female Yuu, although if you want the gender is changeable. This is not my own original work, all credits to Disney and those that helped make the game. So none of the characters, places, or the plot is my own writing. Do not think that, because I do not claim credits to this any major way, I am simply writing the story, places, characters, and characters actions in a novel form. Please give constructive criticism because I am only trying my best.

Written Twisted Wonderland

The screen turns on as the chapter title plays "Chapter - 11; Window Scrubbing".


It opened in the cafeteria after school. Yuu and Grim were waiting for Ace so they could just get their punishment over with. Grim complains "I'm already exhausted from a full day of cleanin'. I can't believe we still gotta wash a hundred windows!" Yuu then says in an annoyed tone, due to being dragged into this because of him "Try and learn from this experience." Grim reflects for a second at most before saying "What's buggin' me is, Ace ain't even here yet! To make us wait, after what he did…Grrr" Yuu stays silent at what Grim had just said. 


The two just sit in silence for a while, although it's unclear exactly how much time had passed until Grim growls out "...And now he's super late! I bet he up and bailed on us!" Yuu considers the possibility before saying "We should look for him." Grim in a way backs her up saying "Ain't no way am I doin' his punishment for him! C'mon, Yuu. I don't care if we gotta drag him kickin' and screamin', he's washin' those windows!" 


It then shows the two looking for him around the school. First they check out a classroom and Grim yells out "Hey! Ace! Get over here! Try to hide from me, will ya!" But then he notices the classroom's empty, as class had ended a little while back. He then asks no one in particular "Huh… Maybe there's really no one here?" 


But suddenly a painting on the wall talks to them, surprising them both "Oh, I wouldn't say that. I'm here." Grim panics as he screams "Bwaaah! That painting just talked!" 


The painting then says slightly offended "Yes, and…? Is a talking painting really such an oddity at this school? The lady in the portrait on that wall talks too. As does the gentleman in the portrait on this one. As long as a painting has a mouth, why wouldn't it be able to talk? Is that really so strange?" Yuu answers his questions "In fact, yes. Paintings don't usually talk." The painting is slightly snub-ish as it replies "Well, your 'usual' and my 'usual' clearly differ. Shall we agree to disagree on the matter? Now, you seem to be searching for someone." 


Grim explains to the painting "We're lookin' for this guy called Ace. He's got messy hair and a heart drawn on his face." The painting then answers "Ah, I know the one. A new student, I believe? Today was his first day at school. I think he went back to his dorm a while ago." Grim then gets angry saying "Myaaah! So it's true! He's tryin' to ditch us! Do you know which way he went?" The painting once again answers "The door to the dorms is in the eastern building." 


Grim then says to Yuu "Let's chase after him, Yuu!" 


The screen fades to black as "To be continued" plays before fully turning off.


Prologue - Welcome to the Villain's World: Chapter 11; Window Scrubbing