Winter_Fox1

I'm writing the main plot/story of the videogame  "Twisted Wonderland". At first the plan was to also use it for something else but now I'm not sure I will. I'm using a female Yuu, although if you want the gender is changeable. This is not my own original work, all credits to Disney and those that helped make the game. So none of the characters, places, or the plot is my own writing. Do not think that, because I do not claim credits to this any major way, I am simply writing the story, places, characters, and characters actions in a novel form. Please give constructive criticism because I am only trying my best.

Written Twisted Wonderland

The chapter title appears on screen "Chapter - 6; A Carbonara Scrape".


It opens in the courtyard as Grim shouts "Mrrah! I've had it with these boring classes!"


Yuu, who had caught up with the one brain-cell duo, Ace and Deuce, when they caught Grim, hisses in her mind 'You're making a scene.' But she knows that saying that wouldn't make a difference, so instead she says "Then you'll never become a great mage." in as much of a monotone as she could.


Grim pouts as he says "UGH! When did you get all bossy?" Before he gives up and joins them for the rest of classes until lunch.


Now in the cafeteria, as the first-years grab their food and find an empty table.


Grim now in a much better mood cheers "Wooo! Lunchtime at last! Whoa!" as he drools before continuing "They got some good-lookin' grub!"


Deciding to get back at Grim a little, Yuu asks him in a teasing manner "Can you even eat squid and onions, Grim?"


But she's ignored as Grim continues on ranting about the food "Look how fluffy those omelets are! Ooh, grilled chicken! And a bacon-and-egg-tart!"


But this time Ace complains "Shhh! Dude, inside voices! Where was this energy earlier today?"


Grim then turns to Yuu and says "Yuu, grab me the grilled chicken! There's only one left! And an omelet too. And that jelly-filled bread. Just fill your whole tray with 'em!"


But as Grim's ranting he bumps into someone as Grim exclaims "Ow!"


Then a silver haired delinquent shouts at him "Hey! Watch where you're goin'!" Before the silver haired delinquent looked at his tray and shouted "M-my carbonara! You broke the yolk!" As his friend, who has red hair says "Whoa, that's messed up! Pokin' the egg is the best part! You better make this right, pal!" As he yelled out the last sentence.


The delinquents look at Grim's tray as the silver haired one says "I'm gonna need that grilled chicken of yours as compensation." But Grim refuses as he says "Myah?! No way! Hands off the bird, chump! I need my protein, because I am HANGRY!"


The red haired delinquent then threatens "Hey! That's no way to speak to an upperclassman! Catch me outside and I'll teach you some respect!"


Deuce then speaks up "Um, excuse me, sir, but it said in the handbook that fighting with magic was prohibited…"


The silver haired delinquent then says in response "Fighting? You got it all wrong. This is just me helpin' an ignorant freshman know his place." As the red haired one says "Now, let's see just how many ways there are to skin a cat, heh!"


The screen then faded to black as "To be continued" appeared before the screen turned off.


Book 1 - The Rose-Red Tyrant: Chapter 6; A Carbonara Scrape