GodFather System: All my kids are weird

GodFather System: All my kids are weird

Fantasy184 Chapters317.6K Views
Author: World_Simulator
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It has been 800 years since this world was destroyed by a sudden catastrophe.



In order to survive in this world, Linc compromised, and he used his GodFather system.



As long as you raise your daughter like a normal girl and make her admire yourself. Then you will earn a father point, and become stronger with time.



Cute corpse controlling girl: "You are my father, so stay by my side forever!"



Queen of tower: "Dad won't leave me will right?"



Holy priest: "Sorry father, you forced me to do violence. The holy church will bless our relationship."



Seeing the children he had cared for started fighting one after another. Linc raised his hands forward.



"Wait a minute, why are you guys stronger than me!? We got the order wrong!"



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Aurex
Aurex

I enjoyed reading this book, but I feel it has some major problems. Mainly the grammar is truly of Webnovel quality as it’s left me confused more than once. Another problem I’ve seen initially is that the author seems to be running before learning to walk in the sense of world background. The author seems to have an idea of the landscape they’re trying to write but often there is mentions of things that make no sense without background knowledge that simply isn’t present. All in all if you can look past the hard to read grammar there is a gem of a story to see. TLDR: worth reading but don’t bother if grammar bothers you.

3 years ago
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Fly_you_fools
Fly_you_fools

So far I’ve likes it, no wrong spellings and the plot is good. But author you might wanna change the synopsis, your synopsis is similar to those translated ones synopsis so when I first read the synopsis I thought that it was like one of those bad translated ones. Glad I still read it though, keep it up. 👍 Also do you have an update schedule?

3 years ago
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bear_Freak_2422
bear_Freak_2422

the idea of the novel is good and grammar is also nice, it's just that the flow of reading breaks sometimes due to the wording. overall I like it.[img=recommend]

3 years ago
1
_Miyasaka
_Miyasaka

The idea seems interesting and I don't dislike the characters but The writing quality would get 0 stars if the minimum wasn't 1. It's barely understandable most of the time and sometimes it goes below that. It has that MTL feel too. Tbh, it's draining to read, exhausting even. Up to chapter 27, world bg isn't developed much but I decided to give it 4/5 stars for it seemed to be heading in the right direction.

3 years ago
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