A Thunderstorm's Rainbow
Happiness is a luxury.
Eloise’s life is like an arrow traveling in an endless straight direction with no target ahead.
However, she wanted to change how the arrow goes.
One day, she went to a university hoping she could find and meet many people who became friends-except with him.
Eloise met a man named Killian Kane Gauthier, a rumored psychopath at the whole university. She and he get along well, despite the rumors. In her eyes, Killian is just a soft boy who gets bullied because of his softness towards people.
Eloise never prepared herself for a feeling that would bombard her heart out of nowhere, a feeling so peculiar that she herself does not know what it is. Meeting him makes her feel and experience things she wants to feel forever.
But she discovered that her feelings and happiness were more expensive than what she had.
As they said...
HAPPINESS IS A LUXURY and EVERYTHING HAS IT’S PRICE TO PAY
First of all, the synopsis caught me well and the chapters were awesome to read. The writing style and plot development is pretty good. The mystery is embedded nicely in chapters written. The characters are complex and there is lot to unpack. Looking forward to unravel the mystery.
The narrative is nice and the dialogues are well fleshed out. Splendid imagery on your intro, loved it 😍 I can't help but be engrossed with your work. Still, this needs promotion for more readers to discover. It only needs some slight edits and we are good to go! [img=recommend] Imma support you author on your work, keep it up!
Wow! Nice start so far, still needs some working on the grammar department though. But overall, I think this novel is really promising! keep up the good work Author-san!
I think it needs to be a bit more fluid writing-wise, but it's a good, entertaining story. He invites you to continue reading, keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens.
It's disappointing to see such promising romance novel on hiatus! I really love the story telling of this novel; the imagery and how you are pulled to the world itself, definitely a must-read. Continue the good work Author!
This is cute, it made me nostalgic about my university days. Your story has a really good start and your blurb as well. This just needs a little bit of polishing but overall, the plot is great. Keep up the great work, author!
nice start for a story. the premise seems to be interesting. I hope it involves heavy emotion coz that makes a story more beautiful. First POV makes it more immersive. I hope we get 1st PoV for LM too.
you are such an amazing writer.. the way you portray your story .. it seems so real.. i am in love with your work... all the very best for your future
I really fell in love with this novel. the storyline is amazing. The main character is adorably cute. The tint of mischievousness in the story is intriguing. Keep up the good work.
Highly recommend to those who likes school or teenager books, it has a good plot, the story development is great so far and character design is also on point. it's a nice book💫, keep it up 👍.
The narration was so good ngl. The settings, plot and the character was also good. I may not into the genre but this will to tbh. I like itt. Hoping for the next chapter
Your story is extraordinary. I love your storyline. your story gains too many views it is really great. keep it up. I am waiting for the next publication from your side.
The story is really interesting with the MC and the "physcopath" of the school, which makes me really curious as to how it will go. The writing style is also easy to follow and understand, a big plus. I'm definitely staying in tune for more
The FL is really interesting and unique - it's very amusing to see her find so many things troublesome. I also like the intro for the ML - how can he be so innocent but everyone thinks he's a murderer? The author has set up the scene so well and l can't wait to keep reading more!
Got me interested with the whole "psychopath in the uni" scheme, and although I normally dislike modern-style reads, (I'm a heavy fantasy nerd ^^') This has definitely caught my attention, worth the read! Only problems are a few grammatical errors here and there, and some tense changing, but as the book progresses, they'll improve!