Just another autor ranking his own book 5 stars, you dese. rve champ.
Is all i'm going to say.
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3 years ago
23
Dcelano
You do know you can just skip the whole child hood thing right?. Nobody like to know about how he train and Suff, we all know how his power gonna turn out. What a let down.
3 years ago
18
Shiva16draig
Very good story and very entertaining. I just hope they take out that summoning thing since it is enough with the powers of SOLDIER BOY and as long as his personality is the same obviously less racist We are happy.
3 years ago
17
PyteWriter
Grammarly has a free version. For the love of god and all that's holy, download Grammarly man! It is so distracting to read stupid mistakes in spelling and grammar.
3 years ago
13
PsyLoRD
so far so good but if theres no character summoning it would be even better.
3 years ago
2
Manontheledge
Much of what I have to say about this story amounts to : Its a interesting idea and I want to see where this goes. while there could be some improvements to writing errors, I have suffered worse reads so its fine too me. Read this story if you want a promising story.
3 years ago
1
ANANTA
To the AUTHOR,
Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White.
As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU).
Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex.
Change Mutants into Meta-Humans.
MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential,
Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system.
Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts.
Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters.
Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph.
As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP.
Thanks-
Reader!
3 years ago
1
Daoist9083tM
Boa história, alguns pequenos erros de ortografia mas ótima história aguardando novos lançamentos .....................................................................................................
3 years ago
1
Z_Ellis
I really can’t wait for the next chapter I hope it ’s soon
3 years ago
1
Nat_Rob
the stroy so far is really good can't wait for it to continue
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3 years ago
1
John_Wolfie
Yeah,this is a great story. I just hope the author continues it and doesn't abandon this masterpiece..
[Unrelated,but uh,how do people get past the needs one hundred and fifty character / words thing?? Like I would write wayyyy more reviews if that wasn't there,I'd appreciate any help you can give(and yes I am on my phone) ]
2 years ago
0
ArchProgenitor
Great story
Give him serums through consumables and better character synchro and we'll be cruising .
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Just another autor ranking his own book 5 stars, you dese. rve champ. Is all i'm going to say. Hauahauaahauahauhauahauahaahauahauauaauauahauahahaauaahauhauahaauahuaauuaauauauahaauhahaaahahahahauahauahuahauauaahuahauaauaauauauauaauahauauauaua
You do know you can just skip the whole child hood thing right?. Nobody like to know about how he train and Suff, we all know how his power gonna turn out. What a let down.
Very good story and very entertaining. I just hope they take out that summoning thing since it is enough with the powers of SOLDIER BOY and as long as his personality is the same obviously less racist We are happy.
Grammarly has a free version. For the love of god and all that's holy, download Grammarly man! It is so distracting to read stupid mistakes in spelling and grammar.
so far so good but if theres no character summoning it would be even better.
Much of what I have to say about this story amounts to : Its a interesting idea and I want to see where this goes. while there could be some improvements to writing errors, I have suffered worse reads so its fine too me. Read this story if you want a promising story.
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
Boa história, alguns pequenos erros de ortografia mas ótima história aguardando novos lançamentos .....................................................................................................
I really can’t wait for the next chapter I hope it ’s soon
the stroy so far is really good can't wait for it to continue ...................................................................
Yeah,this is a great story. I just hope the author continues it and doesn't abandon this masterpiece.. [Unrelated,but uh,how do people get past the needs one hundred and fifty character / words thing?? Like I would write wayyyy more reviews if that wasn't there,I'd appreciate any help you can give(and yes I am on my phone) ]
Great story Give him serums through consumables and better character synchro and we'll be cruising . ................................. .......................
Please post more I’ve been waiting for months
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