[Death Korps of Justice]

This Fanfic is underrated AF. Although just like the other reviews said he follows other, its quite literally the only thing he can do. TBH in a world like DC where gods are amongst men, it can't really be help much. The longer you read the story, the more you'll like it. depending on your taste. I don't think i even found grammatical mistake, the action is so good i felt like i was actually watching it in my mind. So if you have any spare time, then this is worth the read.

The beginning was good but chapter 3 is were it’s ruined mc losses what makes him unique and becomes like all other dc ff mc he starts to lose his cautious nature and started to trust the league like every other mc that came before him and starts to follow Batman’s orders f him

It was a surprise to see fanfiction.net work by Lord-of-Change to be here, but it's a sight to see and remember! Anyways, to the curious readers that are looking at the reviews as a start, let me start; The Writing Quality is just amazingly good, and the action-fight base is well described. Overall in general aspect, it is a work made thoughtfully. An author who has a passion for his story. Stability of Updates has been for the part the menace to all waiting readers. It is sad, but Lord-of-Change has stated in his last update; which is nearly a year old that life has been busy and so has the game that has captured the author's attention away from the pending update. Story Development is terrific and satisfyingly follows the course of the events that are transpiring. That I mean no odd and awkward 180-degree sudden change to the current story's goal/obstacle of the MC. World Background can only be single-worded, and it is "rich" in a term that it is visibly painted to the reader and so forth situations, events, etc.

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MC behaves in the way you would expect someone of his background would, at the beginning. considering what he is, and the situation he's in, his development isn't really expected, but it's fair when you all but force someone to start thinking.Story is interesting, though I'm torn between the... ineptitude of several side characters, but since this is following a pre written story, not much could be done about it.although, I'm slightly concerned with how the MC's relationship is going to go... he's as dense as a block of lead, and that's being generous.

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A soilder from the 40k world will never become a hero. There are a lot of ridiculous law that exist in the 21 century of dc University(or ours) that are just dumb. The whole world is ridiculous. Humanity relies on a few xenos to protect them, has been invaded by aliens, has definite proof of their existence but their is no global defense force/army. No talks for unity of humanity or anything. The humans of dc universe are just dumb. They lock up convicted murderers, theifs and terrorist only for them to break out. We cannot name a single villain that would not be gunned Down in the imperium of Man. The only thing a We can expect from a person of 40k is to become a politicians or social worker following the watered down ideology of the imperium i.e a strong and united humanity

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I really like it there is nothing wrong with it And the reason it's not for me is because it's a bit slow-paced and the hero work is repetitive not to mention That i'm not a big fan of heroes either. Though i appreciate your work and i am sure everyone else does Have a good day

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