Rewrite

Someone pointed out to me a lot of my mistake's so i'm going to do a rewrite after studying into the lore and history of dragon age as best I can until it's to the point where I can write the story well a hella a lot better also to me my characters feel lifeless kinda like they have the same personality so that is another big problem I will try to fix thank you to those who have read so far and see you when I'm ready for the Rewrite.

Also I'm thinking about scrapping the whole reincarnation bit just letting you know