Chapter 3 The 'slong fong'

Sorry a just wanted to explain a few thing about the novel. The first few chapters are meant to be a bit confusing if the mc is confused you're confused ok much love(basically character development, well sort of)

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"As I notices there's no escape, a strangely feel safe, well as safe as one could be, besides the inevitable fate of starvation, dehydration...death

'As a layed in my presumed to be casket a....a heard scratching'

"Wh-who's there?!?!"

'No answer'

"Oo-ok this is fine it's not like 'it' will get in right?...right?"

The next moment a lid 'a didn't know existed above me' moved it was just a jare but, what a saw fro it, frightened me, to my core

"A minataauuur!!!" a screamed in shock

'A don't know how it even new a was in here, probably my scent?'

'But it doesn't look like any minotaur afe ever seen before?'

'Before a noticed, its eyes were on me and it started roaring'

'A swear it's eyes darted at me faster then the speed of light, a froze'

'A was so petrified with fear, a couldn't even move as it ripped my only form of protection away from me'

'Just before it would ravis--*Cough* a mean kill me something happened, *Spit* it got...

....impaled ??'

'Blood gushed on my face my silver hair drenched in crimson blood of the minotaur'

"What... a mumbled"

'A was too scared to move, a barley forced myself to pear over the edge of the casket'

"There's isn't anybody"

A looked at the minotaur, then looked up'

'It wasn't a person who killed it but a rock, yes a rock.

'A was in a cave'

Before a could question it there was a familiar *Bing* sound in my head

As a looked in front of me, I saw a message

*Monster killed* XP gained 1500

*congratulations on defeating enemy 'SLONG FONG'

*Description: None knows the, Origen of the creature, fore none lived to tell the tale, how the creature gained it's name are still unknown perhaps it always will be, only speculation remains*

'It took me a moment to realize a was talking to the system'

These systems are actually an ultra rare item from the vaults in my old world, Am just glade a could keep it because it grants infinite growth, thy even grants the host the talent to read if the didn't know how to

"A don't know much about systems but a do know the keyword" "status"

"Status"

Host: Ezekiel

gender: male

Level: 5*XP needed to level up 0/200*

HP-27/27 *you are healthy, barely

MP-10/10 *MANA Fu******* ******* YEEAAAAA

Strength-7 *You posses the strength to beat an crippled, dazes ,blind old man on a good day!!!*

Stamina-12 *if you cant beat, them run like a b*****!!!*

charm-55 * You posses the uncanny talent to make a door blush*

Luck-100 * You may get a girl, just maybe*

Stealth-4 * An Orc's mating session's are quieter then you*

Agility-69 * Your able to get in to many uncanny posses *

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Alright just wanted to ask, leave rev other ways a wont know if the chapter's are to short, too long should i ad more detail more, action, less fast paste, slower. ohh yea should i upload more chapters in a week or what. Besides all that thanks' fore the support much love