MISTAKE..

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Author: Hwan_Kyu
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Who are you?

"someone you have a fond memory off"...



What would you do if u were cursed, in a circle you couldn't get out of..your fate written...it couldn't be erased.. It couldn't be changed.. Should you let it happen... Would it be better if I never chose.. Its my fault.. IT ALWAYS IS!



Thought changed finally when-

Read to find out more!

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A girl, Kang Han Byeol from a happy and wealthy family, slowly gets drenched in either fake or real rumors. Events that break trust, realtions and souls occur, a nearly nice family is broken a lovely life is put into tragedy. She falls in love with a man, a man she knows nothing about.



How can you love someone you never learned about?

Theor fate was not a happy one.

But why..

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Why do people have to leave?..

Was trusting a mistake...is it normal to be me..?

I can't let myself be GONE!...

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This story has very deep feelings to me readers so please appreciate it u are very gladly allowed to skip chapters but ill say you'll miss on the things very needed to know.



Please comment ur love it means a lot:)



Enjoyy!



Note: Story may have some parts which may trigger a few losses so please be careful take care!! BUT they will come later on or for new reader they are there.



Love from Author-nim



Additional note: Credits to the original creator of the picture in my cover I have no intention of copyright so credits to the original owner.

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Hwan_Kyu
Hwan_Kyu

This is my book and I'll leave my self a review but for the people that leave the review thank you sooo muchhh ur words really mean alot it really pumps me up to do well thank you all lobee you<3 eve tho the authors that post reviews even tho ur works truly amazing it self thank for giving my chapter a read:) it means alot. Dear author-nim.

2 years ago
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faye_ri
faye_ri

I loved it. To be honest, I was super busy so I wanted to take my time reading but minutes flew by and the next thing I know, I was at the end of the last chapter and impatiently waiting for the next update HAHAHAHA. The author really did a good job in introducing the individuality of each character and I loved how they seemd more "human". Not your typical perfect protagonist. Can't wait to see what our wonderful author has in store for us next!!!

2 years ago
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Fallency
Fallency

The story flows fluidly. Chapters are short but are full of necessary information. The 'creator's thoughts' at the end of the chapters are a gem. Please keep updating, I want to read more!

2 years ago
1
PerditaTritonia
PerditaTritonia

From what I've read, the story has a youthful, easy going vibe to it. The story progresses rather nicely. Pace of the story is just right. A few spelling errors here and there, but I know the Author can easily remedy this once the Author has time. I love how the flow of the story is rather smooth. No abrupt cliff hangers. Each chapter is just the right length; not too long, not too short. Overall, this story has potential! Let's just give the Author some time to iron our her story.

2 years ago
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Qadeer_Dar
Qadeer_Dar

where do i start the story is overall amazing, the character design and everything is brilliant I was just gonna read a few lines but ended up reading the whole thing I don't why but it just speaks to the heart and how the main lead is being treated I hope to see more!! i definitely recommend this for people who like to see someone fall in darkness or sso.

2 years ago
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A_fed_up_reader
A_fed_up_reader

I really liked the story, it was something new and out of the box, I didn't thought that I would actually read it completely but it turns out that it is now in my collections .I really wish to see what happens in the future .how strong MC becomes and takes revenge, there are grammatical mistakes but seeing how you are a new author, I think it's acceptable . The only thing that I disliked was that I thought that the reactions of some of the other children were bit over the top, like whipping her with belt for something her mother May or may not had done just irked me . But overall a good book

2 years ago
1
IngridKM
IngridKM

At first I thought I was just going to read an ordinary story, but it surprisingly it actually moved me quite a bit, and I love the progressing of the story and I love the story itself. I also like how you designed the personality of the siblings. For the writing quality, it's actually very nice, very detailed that you understand what exactly is going on or even down to the smallest detail. It's just the punctuations and capitalizations I'm kind of not fond of. Overall, would recommend it<3

2 years ago
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ItsHashi
ItsHashi

Hmm, i read through it, i'm not rlly sure what to say, its good though thats for sure, it had this way of keeping my attention, and i feel its more like psychological(i didnt look at the genres before starting doe) and yeah knowing how "Rich Kids" feel like, is pretty unique on its own. I noticed some grammar mistakes and how when two people spoke were included in the same paragraph, the author will have to go through it and for grammar mistakes, yeah just use Grammarly, i do so!

2 years ago
1
DA_Aloera
DA_Aloera

The moment I opened this book, I just wanted to take a sneak peak but I ended up reading all the chapter instead, lol. I love the book and I'm hoping to read more because Han byeol didn't do no wrong and her stupid best friend and boyfriend even turned against her, hope they get their Karma🙄 Anyway, nice story author, hope to read more. .

2 years ago
1
appricotblossom
appricotblossom

I've read it and appreciated the hard work that the author put into it, It's a good story with potential, looking forward to it's progression. Hope it only gets better and better.

2 years ago
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1stDaoistOfReading
1stDaoistOfReading

This book Albeit short can make u very angry almost immediately as we can see how ruthlessly our Protagonist is treated by her classmates for something wrong her mother had done. The book's writing quality actually isn't that bad and there are little to no grammar mistakes, the story development is also good but there isn't much known yet but as a 3 chapter book I'll give you five stars for giving me an intriguing chapter experience. Character design isn't too bad either but there isn't much I can say about it but from what I've seen its a great start. The worlds background currently seems to be on what her mother has done without the Mc's knowledge of it and because of her mothers wrongdoings the Mc seemingly become a target of mocking from her fellow classmates and people in the school. Nonetheless author I think you should check your status menu and look around for a skill called [I'm good at making people angry] as the Mc's current predicament makes me quite angry and upset at her current disposition. Peace out author thanks for the read

2 years ago
1