Helvica_43: HIATUS
Author: VerdantCO2
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Gemini Garcia, a selfish and crude 21 year old loner woman decides one day to attempt to steal a cool cloak, in the process makes allies and opens up to people while going around being a bounty hunter.
First novel i've written
1st person view 99% of the time through Gemini's POV
NOTE: This isn't a contemporary romance or romance in general. Webnovel for some reason is categorizing it as one.
NOTE 2: Whenever '[dialogue]' is used, that's 1st person (90% Gemini but may change in bonus chapters. Will specify whenever that happens) talking. Whenever "[dialogue]" is used, that's anyone else talking.
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Alright, i’ll address the fact that Helvica hasn’t received any updates in two months. I didn’t like where the novel direction it was going in (comedy???) because I didn’t properly write out the plot. I’m working on another novel right now that stil is in the drafting phase. Everything I messed up with on Helvica should be minimized. Helvica is taking a hiatus but IF I ever get back to it. Helvica will have a major overhaul in plot and world-building. I still like Gemini Garcia and the other characters I didn’t introduce (20 or more characters?) TO SUMMARIZE: New novel will began serialization in probably two or more weeks. This one has a lot more care in plot and character depth. May be slightly controversial but oh well I also am working on a better novel thumbnail for the other unnamed novel (Not specificing plot lol) so think of the bottom image but not as bad for something like the thumbnail for the new novel. Trick or treat (soon)
I've got to be honest, I didn't get much by reading. I like your humor and your language is great. I can even guess where you're from. But your paragraphing is kind of weird and it's hard to tell the conversations, so please do work on that. Anyways, all the best and find a catchy, cover, please, it works more just like a good synopsis.