I really like how the story progresses. A few grammatical errors here and there, but all around an interesting story!! You can do it author!!
3 years ago
1
Sandipan_Dutta_7440
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
3 years ago
1
WewWar25
The story is well paced and the premise of story is wonderful. It is also rare to novels nowadays to have a little sprinkle of comedy. Keep it up!
3 years ago
1
Flower_Something
This is really good and everything is paced and fleshed out nicely!! I hope to see more of this in the future, and hope to see the attention it deserves!!
I really like how the story progresses. A few grammatical errors here and there, but all around an interesting story!! You can do it author!!
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
The story is well paced and the premise of story is wonderful. It is also rare to novels nowadays to have a little sprinkle of comedy. Keep it up!
This is really good and everything is paced and fleshed out nicely!! I hope to see more of this in the future, and hope to see the attention it deserves!!