A Light Within Darkness

writing quality and world background carry this story, typical female slave/servant in the first 6 chapters who hes sharing his cultivation stuff with doesn't give me a good feeling for this story, usually cultivation fanfics are really interesting but when you start simping/sharing your power with other people without equal benefits its not worth it. Stop handing out freebies to people who don't even deserve them, the servants character isn't even that likeable.

i ussually dont like cultivation but it being ised in 40k setting is intreging. I cant wait to see what the author does. the autho makes the mc start from the trenches a hive cities under city. he doesnt brute forces it he actually thinks it out. and how the mc is growing in strength is awesome and very balanced so far. i just hope the author doeant make him op to easlily.

I smell heresy, the description is already already enough evidence of warp corruption. exterminatus it is then.

cultivation is literally the worst thing you could have chosen as a cheat. not because it isn't strong but because it feals cheap. the only thing people ever change about cultivation in novels is the names of realms and cultivation methods, the energy being cultivated and what makes the mc's cultivation different from other cultivators. and so far yours isnt much different. now im not saying that its bad because i dont like cultivation, that would stupid of me. all im saying is you should maybe try and stand out a bit in that aspect, for example you kinda fallowed the Chinese naming thing where they give stuff long and cringy name, (or aleast i thought it was cringy lol) and honestly i just dont thing cultivation fits very well in 40k, but i really do think you can make it work so ill keep reading and hope this turns out to be just as good as your other works.

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amazing story of high quality like all of the author's other stories. great read so far with nice plot and story. only reason it ain't 5 stars is cause it was just started and not much has been made.

MC: "Is this supposed to be my isekai cheat?" gay story.... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... ....

I enjoy reading this, wish there was more updates and world building.

excellent idea, excellent writing, and very loyal to the base material

Another banger by our boy Azayzel, and honestly one of his better works in my opinion. Basically a Wuxia/Xiania + 40k story except without the stupid bs parts of wuxia/xianxia stories and all the fun of 40k 🤙🏼

Its really good keep up the good work. .....................................................................................................

its alright I suppose. The grammar is pretty good, and the story flow nicely. Though, the characters feel a bit too one dimentional. Also, this might just be a personal thing, but there isnt enough descriptions for the environment. Sure its fanfic and relies on the reader to have prexisting knowledge of how things look, but a little bit more couldve helped. other than that, the fic is pretty solid.

Although there are only 5 chapters as of now I really enjoy reading this, can't wait for more

Love this. I always liked Cultivation Novels and now I get to see it in 40k? COUNT ME IN!