Tangled Desires
Author: Bernice_Naidu
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In a world ruled by mafias, what can an innocent girl do? Especially when the prize is the special key for winning the war. And unbeknownst to the two gangs, there is another gang lurkingin the background.
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A story with good grammar and descriptive character emotion. I am quite an envy how you can flesh out your character so naturally. Keep up the good work author.
Great imagery, I love how you are so thorough and I how you really bring the story to life. In total, it is an amazing story that I'm sure that many people enjoy. Keep up the good work!
For me I thought the first chapter was good because it was engrossing and engaging, and you did a nice job of explaining the characters in a sophisticated way. I also thought there were a few unexplained parts that I hope to learn about in later chapters.
The Story is good, the anticipation it give is the key factor of me liking it, even if it has only 1 chapter I gave a good rating to it, One point I would like the author to introduce the characters as it seems like and abrupt cutscene or maybe you planned it that way so you can keep a mystery.
The first chapter was good for me, it's captivating and interesting, keep it up, can't wait for more, I hope it will get more spicy in future ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Fresh And Astonishing book, I like the way how you described all the characters, The world you have created is Worth Reading, Well done author
Well, the start is amazing. I really like the fast-paced action which the book drew me into. And I seem to see the touch of mysterious elements which I'm very excited to read in further chapters. Waiting for you to update more. And if you keep writing like this with plot twists, it will be awesome.