GIRL!
"She's got the devil's eye!"
"Is she one of them as well?"
The villagers were equally scared of the girl in front of them and the horrific creatures wrecking havoc everywhere. The red full moon was seemingly shining brighter than usual.
"The moon is a bad sign, it might mean the end of our village. Run through the back gate and into the forest everyone!"
The young girl's creepy laugh could be heard everywhere in the area sending chills down people's spines and scaring the ghoul like creatures at the same time. An older overweight woman caring a baby left her house and started running towards the gate leading outside the village and into the forest. When seeing the horrific scenes unfolding in front of her, she decided to close her eyes completely and run in a straight line praying she will get to the other side safely where some of her neighbours were already.
This is a story of survival, the story of a young girl who woke up in a small village surrounded by mountains and monsters. Trapped in a village with cold and unwelcome people, the girl wants to find a way out and beyond the mysterious mountains. This place is not what it seems, but the girl is way more of a beast than she looks.
*Warning: It may contain grotesque scenes, sex, and vulgar language*
THIS IS AN ORIGINAL WORK AND ANY FORM OF COPYING WILL NOT BE TOLERATED!
Very good. This is a good story. I enjoyed reading it, I think other people should read it as they will enjoy it just as much as I enjoyed it.
World building: checked☑️ Writing quality ☑️ Updating stability: ummmm.... Character design:☑️ Story development:☑️☑️ Welcome to the world of Authors 😊 I hope you enjoyed you're journey.
Amazing plot and super writing! It is so good and it keeps surprising me with its unexpected moments. Read it in one breath, totally recommend it!
The author did a splendid job on the storytelling, it is just delightful. The only thing i disliked was the walls of text, try dividing your paragraphs more, and your story will be much more fun to read, given the amazing plot you came up with!
Strong start, good potential though a few errors here and there. Only 4 chapters so far but definitely could be developed into something strong.
The synopsis intrigued me, and I liked the way you described the situation, allowing me to feel the suffocating atmosphere that was there. Great job, author! I'll put this in my library! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well written, of course, needs to be improved more. Maybe get more ideas from real nature and from your travel experience or inner thoughts Frau
Oh, author thank you, thank you, thank you! I've been looking for this kind of story all over web novels. I LOVE horror and thriller! and with a female beast lead? Check me in! Mystery and havoc, with lots of suspense! The setting is ominous. The only thing is...spacing, spacing, spacing! I've said this before and I will do it now too. I know this isn't a big deal, but I just hate reading big paragraphs, especially in web novels, they strain my eyes. You get a five star for the story development and world background, but the characters could use some more depth in my opinion. All in all, it's a great story, and just keep writing!
Love it , please don't ignore the book its amazing, the characters ,the setting , the author is doing a great job. Am hooked, nice book . 💝💝
I like the setup so far; very Ominous feelings came over me. The writing quality is excellent, but it needs little editing, and the story would shine. You have a great story here; keep updating.
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Hi guys! The shameless 5 star review from the author. I put everything I had into this web novel and I will continue with the same effort and passion. Please reply to this comment if you have any questions and I'll be happy to help.[img=recommend]