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Hi! ive been wanting to make time to review this since you reviewed mine not long ago and now I finally have a chance! this is my first time writing a review so sorry if its all over the place. I've read up to chapter 21 as of this review pros: to start off I really enjoy the addition of Zeus into blakes life. I think often times when a main character goes through multiple gloomy experiences during the story its very hard to balance it out and bring them emotional stability. I think zues in a way has become that anchor for blakes emotions by his ability to uplift his mood through a couple of lines here and there. Blake as a character is clearly holding a lot of his emotions bottled up and I'm sure as the story progresses, we will see him open up more. This story does a good job of making the reader worry about blakes mental instability as if we are a part of his family. so far I have enjoyed the mystery of the world and cant wait till Blake dives deeper into his fathers past. cons: as for cons the biggest thing I can think of is to try to separate everything into smaller paragraphs. I read the first 10 chapters on my phone and it can be hard to understand stuff sometimes. I actually have this problem as well and lately i have found that going back and just separating certain sentences can make the overall flow of the story appear much more fluid overall I enjoyed the story so far and cant wait to see your improvement and blakes journey

Family love is at the heart of this story and I felt a lot of emotions reading this book. It also has a spark of adventure to it and mystery as Blake our main character bravely perseveres despite his circumstances. Well written and thought provoking, a good read for anyone wanting to read an inspiring story with a smack of adventure right in the middle.