46. Burning Rage part 2

Zachlor16 is looking through a parascope while Smoking Wrecker is on the floor with a laptop

Zachlor16: And down goes another one. Irate destroying Heroes Central's army out there. He just ripped out the allspark of a transformer. How's the chapter coming? Almost done?

Smoke: Well the Allspark is the cube that gave life to the Transformers. I but whatever. Just putting the finishing touches

Zachlor16: good. Heroes Central wasted his time. Irate can't be killed here. Only in his world. Why did we give him fourth wall awareness?

Smoke: He has a army of course.

Zachlor16: but all it's doing is slowing him down and ticking him off and he just killed everyone with a Mega Nova.

Smoke: Oh crap!

Zachlor16: he's coming back! Are you sure that once you post that he'll go back?

Smoke: I'm completely sure of it man!

Zachlor16: just making sure. *here's door blast off.* Crap! He's in again!

Irate: I'm back and you are all dead!

Zachlor16: i take it you're still mad about the comment saying that you are a Mary Sue and that you haven't been beaten but in all reality you've been beaten by the Terror Crew, Carolborg and Rubbor.

Irate: DAMN RIGHT I AM!

Smoke: and finished. I cast you out Irate!

Irate: I'll be back at the end of the chapter! *Irate gets sucked into the portal*

Zachlor16: wow it actually worked. But we need to get ready for when he comes back. I got weapons buried in the back. You do the intro, I'll start digging up the weapons. *Zachlor16 walks out*

Smoke: Very well. Ok this is part 2 of Burning Rage.

The Loud sisters couldn't believe what's going on, their only brother has gotten a dark side. "Who are you and what have you done to Firecracker!?" Muiltipe Girl asked.

"Leni, Leni, Leni." Irate said. "I am Lincoln. Don't recognize your little brother?"

"Oh. Right. Sorry Linky." Multiple Girl said. Irate then starts to laugh.

"Your such a moron Leni." Irate taunts. "I am not Lincoln. I am better. I am Irate. A pleasure to meet you."

"More like a pleasure not to me you!" Parkour glared.

"What have you done with Lincoln?" Prodigy asked.

"Oh he's no longer in control." Irate said.

"What do you mean?" Wildgirl asks.

"Simple, over the years him and I battled for control." Irate explained. "Granted he didn't know about it until it was too late."

"And i take it you were able to take control a few times?" Amplifier growled.

"You tell me." Irate said. "'As far as I'm concerned, I only got nine sisters.' That ring any bells Luna?"

"That was you?!" Amplfier shouted.

"Yes and remember that letter Lori?" Irate asked

"W-what about it?" Speed Queen stuttered.

"Who do you think gave him the idea?" Irate asked. "It was me! So how does it feel to be the worst sister ever?"

"Why you little twerp!" Speed Queen shouts.

"Everything that he did or said out of anger was all me being the devil on his shoulder." Irate said. "But sadly i couldn't do more then whisper in his ear. But now I have control and damn it, i am gonna have some fun!" He goes full flame and he starts floating. "Time for some fun!" The girls prepare themselves for a fight but Irate suddenly flies away, much to their surprise.

"So when Lincoln's angry that was always that guy?" Wildgirl asked.

"Correct, it must be a case of multiple personality disorder." Prodigy said.

"I'm not so sure about that." Speed Queen said. "I think it might be something else. But that's not important. Right now we need to find him. Let's head to base first in case he went there."

When the girls got to the base, they saw Soothsayer, Mr. Cuddles and the pets still in the same spot as they were when they left and also saw that Sam, Bobby, Ronnie Anne and Clyde had arrived.

"Babe did you found the cause of that huge explosion?" Bobby asked.

"We have and it was Lincoln." said Lori.

"Soothsayer told us about the vision but we didn't want to believe it." Sam says with a shudder. "But i guess we have no choice. So what exactly happened?"

"His anger seems to have developed a consciousness of it's own over the years and battled within our brother's mind for dominance." Lisa explained.

"Huh?" Bobbby and Ronnie Anne said.

"She's saying that Lincoln's anger has a mind of it's own and is in control." Sam explained. Everyone looks at her funny. "What? I speak genius."

"Hey guys, you got a incoming message." Clyde announces. "From someone called Road Hazard."

"I haven't heard from him since that convey mission." said Luna.

Lori pressed a button and Road Hazard's call is connected. "What's up Rod Hazard?" Lori aksed.

"I saw the news about a huge inferno in your home. Is pyro okay?" Road Hazard asked.

"We're not entirely sure." Luna answered. She then begins to explain everything when Luan gets a message on her watch.

"I'll be back." Luan said before walking off. She heads outside and answers her watch. "Hello?"

"Luan! Are you ok?" The voice on the other end asked.

"Maggie? Is that you?" Luan asked.

"Yeah it's me." Maggie replied. "I'm in Tennessee and I sensed something, a dark force." Maggie replied.

"Well, that was my brother." Luan said. "It's a long story."

While Lori listened to everything, she heard something land outside. She heads out and sees Carol.

"Carol what are you doing here?" Lori aksed.

"I saw the giant inferno from the park and by calulations his powers were double the last time I saw him like that." Carol said.

"It is." Lori says. "He's loose."

"Who's loose?" Carol asked.

"Lincoln's anger, Irate." Lori explains. "He has full control of Lincoln's body and he's on the loose. I'm not sure what to do."

"I'm sorry Lori." Carol says while giving her a hug. "If you want i could go after him if you want."

"Thanks but we'll handle this." Lori says. "It's a family thing. Plus not everyone fully trusts you yet."

"I get it Lori." Carol says. "You know, if you can't free your brother you might have to take him down."

"You mean kill him?" Lori asked.

"Lori sometimes being a hero means you have to do the right think, even those it's wrong." Carol said,

"I can't kill my brother." Lori whispered. Carol puts a hand on her shoulder.

"I know. But if it comes down to it, you may have no choice." Carol says. "I gotta head home. I got babysitting duties tonight."

Carol activated her jet pack and flew away leaving Lori with her thoughts.

"Will it really come down to killing my brother?" Lori asks herself. "And since when did Carol have a younger sibling?"

Back in the base, Luna had just finished explaining everything to Road Hazard.

"Damn. That's a lot to take in Sparky." Road Hazard says. "Do you need any help? I can easily get there in a couple days."

"Thanks, dude but we need to handle this." Luna answers. "It's a family thing."

"Alright but if anything bad happens call me." Road Hazard replied and hung up.

"That explains a lot. If you need my help call me okay." Maggie said

"I will." Luan assures her. "Thanks." The two hang up. She then sees Lori walk back into the base.

"So we have backup just in case?" Lori asks.

"Yeah and we need to find Irate before he burns Royal Woods to ashes." said Lynn.

"Right, but where could he have flown off too?" Luan asked. "He could be anywhere."

"Which is why we're going to split up and find him." said Lori.

"Right. Let's move out dudes." Luna ordered.

The Loud girls walked into their home with frowns on their faces. They searched for three hours and they couldn't find Irate anywhere.

"Where could he be?" Lana asked.

"I would've used my tracker but Lynn broke it last weekend." Lisa said.

"Hey it's not fault that I dived and hit your tracker!" Lynn replied.

"So how are we going to tell mom and dad that Lincoln's gone?" Leni aksed.

"I have no idea." Lori answered. They all follow Lori to her and Leni's room and when Lori opens the door, she suddenly stops, causing everyone to bump into her.

"What the heck Lori!?" Lola shouted. "Why did you stop?" Lori doesn't answer but starts to tremble.

"Lori? You ok?" Leni asks. Lori doesn't answer so the girls peak around her and gasp at what they see. Irate lying on Lori's bed.

"Hello girls." Irate greets. "How are things?"

"You were home this whole time?!" Luan asked.

"That's Correct." said Irate.

"Get out!" Lynn demands.

"Why should I?" Irate asks. "Last time i checked I lived here too."

"Um, last i checked LINCOLN lived here. Not you." Lori points out. "So leave here."

"I think not Lori." Irate replied.

"You will leave here. You aren't Lincoln!" Lori argued.

"Technically i am." Irate pointed out. "I lived in Lincoln's mind so technically I'm a part of him. So I technically live here."

"As much as i hate to admit it, he does have a point." Lisa says.

"Dang it!" Lori groaned.

"So you came home instead of causing chaos!" Lynn asked.

"Yeah what's up with that?" Luna demanded.

"Well as much as I would love to go out and cause chaos, it turns out that i need to build up some power before I can have some fun." Irate explained. "But that doesn't mean i don't have things to take of. You see girls, no matter what you do you can't beat me. You can fight all you want but you won't win. Here's why. If you hurt me, you hurt your brother. You can't hurt one without hurting the other. But that shouldn't be a problem now should it? I mean let's face it, he's your personal punching bag. It's always your way or the highway. You never cared about his opinion. You always used the numbers against him. You always have your way and he had no say. Now why is that? Simple: he was afraid of what would happen if he said no. So anger built and i was born. Now sadly we couldn't do anything quite yet. So we made this." He pulls out the notebook. "We created this as ways to figure out to get revenge and now, here we are. You girls won't beat me. Even if you did, you will the knowledge that you beat the hell out of your brother to beat me. And even if you win, I'll keep coming back and coming back and coming back until you have no choice but to kill your brother. Face it girls, i win."

"No we'll find a way to get our brother back." Lori said.

"I'm counting on it." Irate smirked.

Irate then pushes past them while leaving them speechless.

"Kids! Dinner's ready!" Lynn Sr. shouts. The girls exit their rooms slowly and make way downstairs.

"What do we do?" Lynn asks. "They'll notice Lincoln isn't down here."

"Try and think of a lie." Lori replied

"But we can't lie forever!" Lola points out. They get downstairs and sit at the table.

"Um girls, where's your brother?" Rita asks.

"Uh, you see." Lori started until she was interrupted.

"Coming!"

The girls all knew that voice and they wonder what the heck happened. Then see 'Lincoln' coming downstairs and sits down at his seat. "What gives?" Lynn whispered to Lisa.

"It appears that Irate is playing the Lincoln card to prevent out parents from getting suspicious." Lisa whispered back.

"Sorry I'm late." 'Lincoln' says. "Had to use the bathroom."

"It's all good kiddo." Lynn Sr. assures him. "Now let's eat." Everyone starts eating with the girls watching 'Lincoln' while they ate.

"Hey Lola, pass the salt." 'Lincoln' requests. Lola is about to refuse when 'Lincoln' leans closer to her. "I suggest you comply Lola. Unless you don't want to be an orphan." He gestures to under the table and she sees a fireball prepared and aimed at their parents. "So please pass the salt. If you would."

Lola gulps in fear and passes 'Lincoln the salt and then the fireball is put out. "Thank you." 'Lincoln' said.

"This isn't over." Lola glared and whispered quietly as possible.

"You're right. It isn't over." 'Lincoln' tells her. "Far from it."

The girls walk up to Lincoln's room and bursted opened the door. "Alright Irate we know what you're doing. You're Playing the Lincoln card so our parents won't find out." Lori said.

"Why Lori, why ever would you believe that?" Irate asked mockingly.

"You know the reason!" Lola glared.

"He was mocking us Lola." Lana whispered to her twin.

"Very good Lana." Irate said. "You're smarter than you look." Lana scowls but Irate ignores her. "Look, like I said before the only reason I'm pretending to be the inferior Lincoln is i need to build up power so I can cause chaos in the city."

"Not unless we stop you before you get a chance." Luna growled. Irate just chucked.

"We'll see who's stopped first." Irate says before slamming his door.

"What did he mean by that?" Lana whispered to her twin sister.

'Lincoln' showed Lynn Sr that the toilet got clogged up. "Well I'm glad you told me about this kiddo." Lynn Sr said.

"Here's Big Bertha dad." 'Lincoln' says. He hands his father said plunger. "I believe that you easily figure out who clogged the toilet this time."

"I doubt that son." Lynn Sr. says. He gets to work on the toilet and after a few minutes he pulls out the culprit: a red ribbon. "Wait a minute. I know this ribbon. LOLA!"

Lola steps out of her room and walks towards the bathroom. "Yes daddy?" Lola asked nervously.

"Did you clogged the toilet?" Lynn Sr asked.

"I would never do that!" Lola exclaimed.

"Then what's this?" Lynn Sr. asked as he held up the ribbon.

"My ribbon for my ribbon dance." Lola answered. "But I didn't clog the toilet."

"Then why is your ribbon clogged the toilet?" Lynn Sr asked.

"I don't know and I didn't do it!" Lola exclaimed.

"I'm sorry Lola, but you're grounded for a week." Lynn Sr. says. He then walks downstairs.

"Looks like rattle tail has become the tattled." Irate smirked.

"You clogged the toilet and framed me!" Lola exclaimed.

"And all evidence points to you." Irate says. "Enjoy being grounded."

"Hey mom! I have something to show you!" 'Lincoln' says while holding something behind his back.

"What is it sweetie?" Rita asked.

"Remember when you asked where the Christmas decorations are and you couldn't find them?" 'Lincoln' asked. "Well I found out who the crock was."

"Really? Who?" Rita asked.

"Leni." 'Lincoln' answered. "Also, remember when your wedding dress went missing?"

"Yes." Rita answered irritated.

"Well Lucy borrowed and painted it black for a pretend wedding with her bust." 'Lincoln' told her.

"Thank you for telling me Lincoln." Rita says. "Time to go talk to your sisters."

"Whatever you say." 'Lincoln' said as he watched Rita walk upstairs.

As soon as she's upstairs, Irate lets out a chuckle at his success so far.

"What are you up too?" Irate turns and sees Charles behind him.

"What does it look like?" Irate answers. "I'm having some fun while my power builds up."

"By getting revenge on the girls?!" Charles growled. "They've already paid the price! Lincoln wouldn't want this!"

"Who gives a damn what Lincoln likes." Irate scoffs. "I've silenced him and I'm in control. I'm winning this fight now."

"You won't get away with this." Charles growled.

"I'm already Snoppie." Irate smirked and walked away.

After he's gone, the rest of the pets come out of their hiding spots.

"Well that didn't work." Cliff sighed.

"One's gotta wonder if Lincoln is even in there." Walt says.

"I wonder if he's fighting in there?" Cliff asked.

"If he is, he's losing." Geo sighs.

Irate managed to get Lincoln's sisters grounded for many things. He blamed Lynn for breaking the window with a baseball, blamed Lori for scratching Vanzilla with her rhyme stone purse, and blamed Lana for tracking mud in the house and many countless misdeeds. The Loud sisters have had it with Irate and decided to confront him.

"Ok Irate, we are sick and tired of you getting us in trouble." Lori says.

"I see. Well ok then." Irate says. "Excuse me for a moment." He walks into Lincoln's room and walks out with a small bag. "Here, you go. An apology gift." The girls look at Irate untrusting. Lola shrugs and grabs the bag and looks inside. She then screams and dumps the bag to reveal a destroyed Bun Bun.

"You killed Bun Bun!" Lola exclaimed. "That was Linky's favorite toy!"

"But not mine. Now for icing on the cake." Irate says. He raises a fist and the girls get ready. However, much to their surprise, he punches himself in the gut. He then starts banging his head on the wall until he starts bleeding before ramming his knee into his door frame. He bangs his arm on the floor. "That should do it."

"Um, why did you literally just beat yourself up?" Lori asked.

"Simple." Irate smirked. "Mom! Dad! The girls beat me up!" 'Lincoln.' cried out.

"WHAT!?" The two parents run upstairs to see their sole son on the ground with cuts and bruises on him.

"What happened?" Rita demanded as she looked over her son.

"I just wanted to hang out with them and their response was to beat me up." 'Lincoln' cries. "Then they killed Bun Bun!"

"Oh you girls are in big trouble!" Lynn Sr. tells them. "All ten of you are grounded for the rest of the month. Come on son, let's get you patched up." He helps his 'son' to his feet and he and Rita help him to the stairs. As they walk, 'Lincoln' glances back at the girls and flashes them an evil smile.

Lola glared at Irate and wants to go after him but Lynn stops her. "No Lola we can't risk being grounded another month." Lynn sighed.

"I know." Lola sighed. "I can't believe he outsmarted us."

"You're telling me." said Lori.

"Girls! Come down here please!" Rita calls.

The sisters all walked downstairs where they see their parents sitting on the couch with stern looks on their faces. "Your mother and I were discussing about the acts of misbehaviour around the house." Lynn Sr said.

"Which we didn't do." Luna thought.

"Now we were considering sending all ten of you to Aunt Ruth's for the weekend but then your brother talked us out of it." Rita continued.

"He did what now?" The girls said in unison.

"In fact he thinks we should un-ground all of you." Lynn Sr. added.

"He wanted to have us ungrounded?" Lori asked.

"Yeah we were surprised by this too." Rita replied.

"He did a presentation and everything." Lynn Sr. added. "So starting tomorrow, you girls are ungrounded."

"But you are still grounded for today." Rita finished. "Are we clear?"

"Yes mom." The sisters all replied.

"Good. Now what do you say to your brother?" Rita says. The girls look at 'Lincoln' and sees that he has a triumphant smile on his face.

"Thank you Lincoln." The girls said through gritted teeth.

"You're welcome." 'Lincoln' replied.

The girls and 'Lincoln' head upstairs where they confront Irate.

"Ok, start talking Irate!" Luan demanded. "First you get us in trouble, now you get us out of trouble. What gives?"

"Does it really matter?" Irate asked. "You girls are no longer in trouble. You can go out and do your things tomorrow. Have a nice day." He then walks off to Lincoln's room.

"Dudes, this is weird." Luna says.

Lisa sat by her workbench working on the reactor for Lincoln's suit and she was adding the finishing touches.

"Almost done." said Lisa.

"Good because I want my old Lincoln back." Charles said.

"But there's one problem." Lisa said. "I need Lincoln to have the reactor."

"Can you explain more?" Lana asked.

"She means that Lincoln needs to be in control of the body." Lori explains.

"Correct. If we put this on while Irate is in control, we risk losing Lincoln forever." Lisa told them. "That's easier said then done."

"Yeah. Irate doesn't seem keen on letting Lincoln take back control." Lynn points out.

"Well how are we suppose to do? Just sit back and wait for Linky to fight back?" Lola asked.

"Or do we defeat Irate with the power of love?" Lynn asked. "What that sounded lame."

"I honestly have no idea." Lisa admitted. "Ever since Irate has taken control, there has been no sign of Lincoln fighting back in his mind. All I know is that our brother is still in there and we need to get him out."

"Well I hope he's fightiing back against Irate." Luan sighed.

"Hopefully." Lori sighed. "But for now, tomorrow we need to do our normal things. If we don't mom and dad will get suspicious or even worse Irate. So no matter what, do your normal things even if it's just for a hour. Then later we'll make a plan to stop Irate. Agreed?"

"Agree!" The sisters all replied while Lily nodded.

Lynn was at the basketball court in the park working on her free throws while also thinking about how they can stop Irate.

"I don't know what to do." Lynn groaned. "I've fought him before but he was under mind control. Now he's got some angry demon controlling his body. This is so frustrating!" She throws her basketball at the net but it bounces off and away from the court. "Dang it." She goes to where her ball bounced off to and sees it by a bench. She starts to walk towards the bench when a fireball is fired at her feet. "What the hell!?"

"Hello Lynn!" Lynn looks up and sees Irate flying above her. "Enjoying your game?"

"Irate! What are doing here?" Lynn demands.

"Simple. It's time for the fun to begin." Irate answers.

To be continued

Zachlor16 and Smoking Wrecker are going over their weapons.

Zachlor16: plasma rifle?

Smoke: try that and i'll Hit him with the Spartan Laser!

Zachlor16: nice. Do we have the BFG 9000?

Smoke: Yes we do. I even got the holy hand grenade from Monty Python and the holy grail.

Zachlor16: Nice. I also got a Keyblade, a few super shotguns and this sweet light saber. I also got this picture of Morgan Freeman along with a tape with his voice.

Smoke: what will that do?

Zachlor16: keep us calm while we face certain doom.

Smoke: Good idea, that man has Ana amazing voice,

Zachlor16: Indeed. *sees a portal appear* He's coming.

Smoke: *grabs the chainsaw staff from Gears of war 2* let's do this.

Irate: *walks out of the portal* hello dorks.

Zachlor16: Irate. We knew you'd come and this time we're ready. *picks up a super shotgun from Doom*

Irate: so you say. Prepare to die!

Zachlor16: hold him off. I'll do the outro.

Smoke: You got it! *charge to battle with a energy sword from Halo*

Zachlor16: hey guys. Hope you enjoyed part 2 of Burning Rage. Sorry for the lack of violence but i promise, next chapter will have action. So, if you excuse me *cocks* shotgun* i have to battle Irate. Wish us luck! *charges into battle*