sweety ha mushkil to hoga..per pyar bare bare mushkilo ko asan ker deta hey...and regards Abhirika story mature to hogi per nt like this one..it's a total dfrnt concept..conflict in the mind of a girl
guest hmm so u wants a duo story from me..can u give me some theme..maybe I can get a good idea
guest hum to bas uss change ki umid ker skte hey jab story ki chrctr ki tarah reality mey bhi har larki ko aise support milega..per ha story mey real touch lana hey isliye agey kuch cheez lane honge jo sayed dardnaq ho..be ready
guest149 iss sab ki bad kisi larke pey asani se bharosa nahi kiya ja sakta na..so I just tried to show natural side..
Haseena isse jaldi aur isse long..bapre..na babah na...thora adjust kerlo yaar
Jasdeep, Guest, Anjaana, Praise, Guest, Bhumi, Guest, Tamanna, Guest, Blair, Puja, Katiiy, Guest, Jeba, Topaz, SHZK, Disani, Mistic Morning, LoveAbhi, Chocolate, Guest, Kashaf thank you very much
guys Sunday ki epi ka Abhirika mujhe bahut pasand aya..no over acting forced show off but a silent bond..a matured behavior..no that cute fluffy style..after long got a glimpse of my type of Abhirika..so bahut inspired ho gayi..iss chapter mey little bit Abhirika jyada hoga..kisi ko bura lage to sorry...pls...
And yea another imp thing..
Aaplog mese bahut log Facebook mey ho na?aur unmese bahut log Abhijeet fan bhi honge..
So can u pls go over to
www. facebook SupercopAbhijeet
(im using space as link is not coming up on this page..)
and give ur precious opinion there..pls..
U can find this page also on my timeline..pls frnds..
Chalo bahut lambi bak bak krli aab story...
Abhijeet is sitting at terrace thinking something deeply fidgeting with his mobile..
Tarika came up with two cups of coffee "Abhijeet.."
she didn't get any response so kept both the cups and sat beside while putting a soft hand on his palms..
He looked up "hmm"
"coffee.."
"ha do.."
he took the cup but didn't take a sip..
"kya soch rahe ho.."
"bas..asehi.."
"hospital mey jo dekha uss bareme?"
"nahi..wo mein janta tha..sure nahi tha..per bekhabar nahi tha.."
"fir.."
"Tarika hum cahe jitni bhi kehle ki iss society ki hume qadar nahi..iss society mey hi hume rehna hey.."
"mtlb.."
"kal Shreya man jaye fir shaadi ho..fir.."
"kuch smjhi nahi.."
"newspaper mey news mey achuka hey cid officer Shreya ki saath kya hua..kal shaadi ki bad assparos ki sab acha sab na sahi kuch log jab iss baat ko uthayenge..tab..dusro ki choro..Daya ki koi dost wagera hi jab bolenge to?"
Tarika sighed.. "Daya smjhdar hey wo dil se nahi lega kuch aur Shreya ko bhi.."
"nahi Tarika jo bas humare smjhane ki koshish ki badle yea keh skta hey ki wo apna gher dekh lega uspey yea batein kaafi effect keregi.."
they both were silent fr some moment then Tarika called in low tone
"Abhijeet"
"hmm?"
"dopeher ko mummy se baat hui..unhe Shreya ka pata chala,wo concern ho rahi thi.."
"to?"
"meine Daya ki faisle ki baat ki to wo bhi react kiya.."
Abhijeet sighed "pata tha..serf mummy jee nahi bahut log aise react karenge.."
"tumse ek baat puchu?"
"pucho"
"tum khud kya sochte ho..khush ho yea.."
Abhijeet sighed deeply while throwing back his head "pata nahi..confused hu..ek bar garv mehsus hota hey..ek bar darr..aur pehli bar mein apni baat thik se Daya ko baata taq nahi pa raha hu.."
Tarika was quiet fr some moments then rested her chin on his shoulder with "tum hi to kehte ho kuch cheez ka best solution waqt hota hey.."
"ha per...pata nahi..uska gussa aur Shreya ki reactions...logo ki baatein aur unn dono ka future.."
Tarika pressed his arm "Abhijeet tum aise mat socho na.."
"pata nahi Tarika...sochne jau to bas Daya ka ek sawal yaad ata hey"
Tarika looked up to him
"ager isi jagah hum dono hote to.."
Tarika sighed "tum bhi yeahi faisla krte.."
Abhijeet securely wrap his hands around her "pata hey jab Daya ne yea baat kahi..mujhe gussa ana cahiye tha per.."
Tarika smilingly added "ana cahiye bhi nahi..acha chalo aab coffee piyo..fir dinner banane jati hu.."
they started having the coffee when heard a doorbell
Tarika signaled "lo agaya tumhara ladla..aab sorry kehega ake..mein chlti hu dinner banane.."
Abhijeet smiled and went over to the door..
Daya entered with a grave face and sat down on sofa resting his head on head rest..
Abhijeet studied his reactions then sat down on the opposite couch
Tarika came out of kitchen looked at both "Shreya kaisi hey?"
Daya nodded..
Tarika sighed with "use discharge kab taq milega?"
"kal"
he didn't seemed interested to speak so Tarika moved back to kitchen..
Abhijeet was about to enter his room when heard "boss.."
he stopped and turned
"Shreya ki mummy papa aye they ..wo dono kal Shreya ko apne saath le jana cahte hey.."
Abhijeet sat back again with "unhe pregnancy ki bareme pata hey.."
Daya looked at him and nodded "wo log keh rahe they kisi dctr se baat krenge jo yea risk leke bhi abode.."
he stopped.
Abhijeet frowned with "Shreya ki jaan ko khtra hey yea jan k bhi.."
Daya nodded..
Abhijeet shook his head with "aur Shreya?"
"wo bhi raaji hey..uska kehna hey aise jillat ki jindegi se maut.."
"tumne baat nahi ki uski parents se.."
"wo sab log use bache ko bahut kos rahe they Abhi..keh rahe they aise bache ager janm bhi le ley use phek dena cahiye kure mey.." he looked up at Abhijeet "boss kure mey to gandigi.."
"shh chup kuch nahi hoga aisa.." Abhijeet pressed his shoulder but actually his mind is somewhere else
Daya knelt down in front of him "Abhi tum baat kro na un logo se..unki ijjat pey to koi anch nahi ayegi na..mein uss bache ko aur Shreya dono ko..Abhi pls..Shreya ko kuch ho jayega..wo log uss bache ko bhi.."
Abhijeet shook his head in no,Daya rested his forehead on his knees "Abhi baat karoge na?"
Abhijeet silently caressed his hairs "hmm..karunga..chal uth ja..jake fresh ho ja..uth.."
but Daya was not interested to move "sorry.."
"kiu kya hua.."
"tab mujhe waise ghor chorne ki baat nahi kerni cahiye thi..sir se bhi waise nahi kehna cahiye tha..sorry"
Abhijeet felt a smiling gaze coming from their side looked up found Tarika smiling by herself looking at them..
He too smiled "naraj nahi hu..mujhe pata hey tere sarr ki jo kire hey wo kAbhie kabhie jyada chalne firne lagta hey.."
Daya too smiled but didn't get up "pata nahi aj kal bahut gussa ata hey..pata hey ki tum aur Tarika mere vale ka soch k hi bol rahe they per bas gussa agaya..aj hospital mey bhi gussa agaya Shreya ki parents ki baat sun k..mein chala aya.."
"acha kiya warna hone wale sasur se larta hua acha nahi lgta.."
Daya moved up his head "tum...tumne..accept ker liya..tum raaji ho..iss rishte..sach?"
"ha babah raaji nahi hota to janab naye gher.."
"nahi Abhi mein bas.." he averted his gaze..
Tarika decided to interfere "Abhijeet tum bhi na..Daya Abhijeet sach mey raaji hey iss rishte k liye.."
Daya look up with a broad smile "sach.."
Abhijeet patted his cheeks softly "hmm bilkul..mein kal Shreya ki parents se baat bhi ker lunga.."
"thanks thnk u very much Abhi.."
he gave a quick hug..
"per ek baat krni hey.."
Daya left him with "bolo.."
"baith.."
he confusingly sat down..Abhijeet exchanged glances with Tarika who gave a nod
"Daya humare asspass bahut qisam ke log hote hey..aj bhi kuch logo ki soch bahut peeche ki hey..ek taraf to naye naye app naye technology ki bina reh nahi pate..upar se modern dress modern tarike ki rehen sehen per soch wohi dakiyanusi..aab aise log mese kuch humare qaribi ho skte hey..kuch jaan pehchan ke..right?"
Daya confusingly nodded
"kal tum dono ki shaadi ki bad bhi aise log Shreya ko leke koi baat kr skte hey..uske liye kuch aisa keh skte hey jo kehna nahi cahiye.."
Daya cut him with "koi Shreya ko kuch keh usse pehle mein uska juban.."
"aur Shreya isse khush hogi?" Tarika asked while settling down
Daya looked down, eyes showing the rage
Abhijeet signaled Tarika to be quiet "sab ki juban band nahi kiya ja sakta na?aur tumse jyada bura Shreya ko lagega..upar se tum aise react karoge to use aur hurt hoga hey na?guilt hoga?"
Daya didn't answer "tum iss gusse ko kabu kerna sikho..Shreya ko uss Daya ki jarurat hey jo uski behoshi mey usse pyar ki ijhar kerta hey (Daya looked up with a jerk..seeing the naughty glance of Tarika again looked dwn with a shy smile, Abhijeet slapped his head lightly with) yea wala sharmila sa ek saathi ki..wo nahi jo ake ek thapper mar dey..smjhe?"
Daya nodded
"dekh koi kuch bhi kahe tujhe bharosa hey ki tu ne sahi decision liya?"
"haan.."
"fir kisi aur ko biswas dilane ki smjhane ki jarurat nahi..khud ki faisle pey biswas rakhna aur Shreya ko bas serf Shreya ko yakin dilana ki tu sahi hey..ok?"
he nodded smiling "smjh gaya..mein jitna dusro se uljhunga Shreya khud mey utna ulajh jayegi.."
Tarika sighed fakely "lo aab to kaafi smjhdar ho gaya mera devar..khaali pet bhi dimaag chalne laga hey.."
"kya Tarika..mein fresh hoke ata hu..khana ready kro.."
he moved in his room..
Abhijeet sighed "Shreya ki parents aise kaise.."
Tarika shook her head "nahi Abhijeet unhe hum jhat se galat bhi to nahi keh skte na..yea bacha ager ajaye to Shreya ki jindegi ka kya hoga socha..ager Daya yea faisla na leta fir hum bhi sochte na ki iss bache se chutkara hi behtar option hey.."
Abhijeet nodded "sayed tum thik..acha tum khane ka dekh lo mujhe acp sir se kuch baat krni hey.."
"Abhijeet wo acp sir..unhe to malum hey na sab to wo.."
"unhe bhi yeahi darr hey ki Daya bhavnao mey beheke kahi na le faisla.."
"hmm..tum sach mey.."
"ha Tarika mujhe aab sach mey prob nahi hey..aj taq sare faisle Daya ne bhavnao mey hi liye..criminal's ke liye itna gussa wo bhi uska sentimental nature se ata hey,collugues ki liye pyar bhi..17saal pehle ki humari dosti bhi..to ek aur sahi.."
he moved in his room after giving an assuring nod to Tarika who just closed her eyes "bas aab kAbhie humara darr sach na ho.."
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Shreya was starring at the ceiling trying hard to concentrate on any one point..
Her mind going over all those
the dark room..the filthy smell..the cold floor..the alcohol smell coming nearer..the pain of getting touched by burning cigarette..the rough hands travelling all over her
she closed her eyes..
Those red eyes with a smirk seductive and very dirty look over the face coming nearer..smelling strongly of some cheap alcohol
the high pain when they are occupying her body..
she sat up with a jerk feeling very heavy..as if her weight increased in some minutes to hundred pounds..
She was breathing heavily..
The reports telling she is pregnant..her gynecologist friend confirming she can't abode
a tear rolled down her cheeks
She decided to go away in sea...its deep enough to carry so many dirts so many pollutants...cant it take her..One more unwanted dirt?
But
No two strong hands grabbed her brought her back...
The eyes which always relaxed her fail to do that...but she didn't have energy to force...
Tired she felt...
The decision...she should be happy about it...but...
She sighed "aapne ya faisla kiu liya sir? Mere liye yea iss bache k liye? sayed aapko uss dard ka andaja hey jo ise apne paida hone se apne jindegi ki har hisse mey vugtna hoga..kaahi na kaahi aap uss sbse..per mein raaji nahi ho sakti..Itni swarthi nahi ho sakti na mein..Mein nahi hu kisi ki bhi layek na yea bacha..kehte hey ek ma janti hey uss bache ka baap kaun hey..per mein to aisi badnasib ma hu ki yea bhi nahi jnti kaun..kis ki darindigi ki nishan hey yea.."
She closed her eyes tightly but unable to stop the tears.
She got down the bed went near the window and looked out...looking at the sky getting more and more dark announcing the pitch dark night...
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Shreya's parents were about to enter her room when found Tarika and Purvi standing there...Tarika started "aunty uncle hume aapse kuch baat kerni thi..."
The old couple exchanged glances "ha beta bolo.."
"yeaha nahi..aaplog pls cafeteria chaliye baith k batein.."
Shreya's father agreed "ha chalo.."
four of them headed to the hospital cafeteria where already duo was waiting fr them..
After they all got seated Abhijeet started rather uncomfortably "wo actually..Shreya ki bareme kuch baat krni thi..uncle aap log sab jante hi hey..aur sayed pareshan bhi hey ki agey Shreya ki jindegi kaise gujregi..aise mey ager koi Shreya ki haath thamna cahe iss bache ki saath to aap log kya sochenge uss bareme?"
the old couple was rather bewildered at the question looks at each other,while other four also having their glance fixed on them
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