AWAKENED WITH A COMPLEX SIMPLICITY SYSTEM [THE FUTIAN SERIES]

An awesome work....... slight edits have to be made and also the grammar can be improved. Overall a good read for me and I liked the story that much.....potential is also there and It needed more features for a traction of boosts in views. The readers would like to see its end so don't give up [img=recommend]

Don't get me wrong. Just like the characters, I can't help but be shameless for once you know. It makes the fun funnier. Sorry! What exactly was that supposed to mean? Anyways! jokes aside it is a fun fantastic book with some comedy after the first introduction chapters. Correction will be made later on. Just leave a chapter comment and its done. Just read and have fun. More chapters coming in. Your shameless author 😂 ~ Brightbrain 256 Show some love and drop a power stone. I can lend you some if you don't have enough. Just say a words and your soul shall be healed. Oops! This is the longest review in history! And that's what makes us unique. Being shameless!

Grammar needs a bit of work, but the concept is very fun and has a very long way to go. I can't wait to see how this story develops, and what happens in the end.

Overall, I found the fantasy magic school setting in this story to be engaging and well done. While there were some minor writing issues such as missing spaces around punctuation, these did not detract from the overall enjoyment of the tale. As a debut work, this is a promising start and I have no doubt that the author will continue to improve and grow as they write more. I would encourage the author to keep up the good work and look forward to seeing what they have in store for us in the future.

The start up is... Unique (I like how you end your chapters). The pacing is good and the writing quality is perfect.I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.

This a must read detailed and descriptive writing, this book is one of a kind i love how everything is brought down to detail, its a book i will add to my library and look for to its updates, this author knows his story thank you for sharing your talent and giving us something decent to read.

The dramatic setup to the story is quick, simple, and effective. The introduction to the system makes sense, and the dialogue between a moderately large cast in the first few chapters is nice. The MC isn't annoying. Unfortunately, the writing quality itself is terrible. Here's an example from Chapter Four: '" You see... I won you. So pay up!Two gold coins!" The fatty one Carrying a bow in this back said joyously.' If that doesn't bother you and you enjoy xianxia-inspired stories then give this one a try.

Okay, so the pace of the story is perfect and even the plot is good, but I think you should work on your writing style. Little edit can help. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. The main plot just grips you in. I would love to read it further. All the best author [img=recommend]

A very engaging story and I love the historical setting. Grammar definitely got better as the story progressed. Please keep it up; I will be following up to read more! [img=update]

Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, it has an intriguing plot though: 1. Good idea to start the story with an interesting prologue. 2. Good language control. 3. Few edits are needed to but, everything is just fine. Again, thank you and best of luck to you.

The world background is awesome. The character design and storyline is the best. Good work author.

Awesome job.... slight edits should be made and grammar could be improved as well. Overall, it was a good read for me and I really liked the story....

I'm so hooked! Although there're a few grammar mistakes the fact is that its simplicity is a good thing, keeps you hooked and interested. The premise is promising and as I read on- the rest of the novel too! Keep it up author, i'm camping here for sure!

It shows a promising start. It immediately caught my attention and made me curious about the book. Just slight edits and grammar improvements and this could be an amazing story. There is some potential to this story.