The beginning was abrupt but as soon as it developed, it became a thriller. It was nothing I thought of. It's better than I imagined. The plot is strong, characters are well built, dialogues are in good flow and the setting is pretty cool too. keep up the good work. you are doing great.
3 years ago
5
rydertheking
little fast paced but everything went from 0 to 100 real quick! didn't expect a novel that was initially in my eyes a 2/5 to become a 4.5/5 like that. really respect the grind and dedication you have put on your novel!
<3 recommend to anyone!
3 years ago
2
Sweet_Vanilla553
I think this is good. Synopsis though.. It's a little short yet attractive and made me want to read the novel. From what I got I think the plot is going on smoothly. As I read I keep reading more and more. So approved this. Highly recommended!!!
3 years ago
3
ZoeTinnah
Nice story Creation 🥰🥰🥰🥰💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 nice character development
3 years ago
4
novelandmangalover
In the beginning the writing and length of the chapters is not so good but it gets better after the 5 chapter. It has daily uploads and the characters are ok and are easy to understand although the MC is sometimes an idiot. And we need a backstory on the MC and his friends.
3 years ago
4
Natay93
As someone who struggled with trying to figure what I was going to do before I finished school. I was able to relate to the character. The plot twist at the end caught me by surprise. It was really good. My only issue is the first chapter was kinda short. But over all great writing. I'll most definitely keep reading this book.
3 years ago
3
vesnxx
its deffinitely not for prople that are week hearted 🤣🤣 this story is soo full of plot twist but they are made in such a good way...I can only say wow and keep up your work author 😁❤
3 years ago
3
Account_nolonger
Okay so the story started off simple with normal teen life but at the end of the first chapter I really liked the twist, keep going your story has potential just a little bit polishing and your story will be flawless, great work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️
3 years ago
3
Sweet_xiyue
Your story is good i will not lie. But it's really fast paced. I'm not telling it's bad i love fast paced books so love to read your novel. waiting for the next chapter.
3 years ago
2
Maryam_Mayo
The fact that there is so little detail is one thing I really dislike. I want to learn more about the environment your characters are in. This story has a tonne of unexpected turns. Your story had me completely engrossed. I had to continue reading because I couldn't help myself hehe
3 years ago
2
ForzaGG
Review till Chapter 14:
I found the story to be a little fast-paced and simple at the beginning but that changed very fast. The story has its ups and downs but there is always a twist at the end of the chapters. The characters and the world are built well and dialogues are in a good flow, please keep up the good work. [img=recommend]
3 years ago
2
Jaison_Arbor
Lemme leave everything aside, I loved how you put "The End" as the name of the first chapter 🤣, the storyline is pretty good and how it is progressing and jumping from one plot twist to another shows how much the author is doing hard work, best of luck!🍃
3 years ago
2
Kamera189
It started off a little rough and fast but once I read a little more it got a lot better. Besides the beginning I love everything overall and I don’t have many complaints to say for this one.
3 years ago
1
GrandSky
It's probably gonna be clichè if I say this, but your novel was extremely abrupt in the beginning. The plot moved too fast for me. Plus, your characters need more work. Probably find a way to properly integrate them better further on. But that's just my opinion. Liked the novel though. I think it will be a great one. Keep it up!
From GrandSky.
3 years ago
1
Withe_Reaper
I found the story interesting, I recommend you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not.
I hope the author continues to write.
The beginning was abrupt but as soon as it developed, it became a thriller. It was nothing I thought of. It's better than I imagined. The plot is strong, characters are well built, dialogues are in good flow and the setting is pretty cool too. keep up the good work. you are doing great.
little fast paced but everything went from 0 to 100 real quick! didn't expect a novel that was initially in my eyes a 2/5 to become a 4.5/5 like that. really respect the grind and dedication you have put on your novel! <3 recommend to anyone!
I think this is good. Synopsis though.. It's a little short yet attractive and made me want to read the novel. From what I got I think the plot is going on smoothly. As I read I keep reading more and more. So approved this. Highly recommended!!!
Nice story Creation 🥰🥰🥰🥰💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 nice character development
In the beginning the writing and length of the chapters is not so good but it gets better after the 5 chapter. It has daily uploads and the characters are ok and are easy to understand although the MC is sometimes an idiot. And we need a backstory on the MC and his friends.
As someone who struggled with trying to figure what I was going to do before I finished school. I was able to relate to the character. The plot twist at the end caught me by surprise. It was really good. My only issue is the first chapter was kinda short. But over all great writing. I'll most definitely keep reading this book.
its deffinitely not for prople that are week hearted 🤣🤣 this story is soo full of plot twist but they are made in such a good way...I can only say wow and keep up your work author 😁❤
Okay so the story started off simple with normal teen life but at the end of the first chapter I really liked the twist, keep going your story has potential just a little bit polishing and your story will be flawless, great work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Your story is good i will not lie. But it's really fast paced. I'm not telling it's bad i love fast paced books so love to read your novel. waiting for the next chapter.
The fact that there is so little detail is one thing I really dislike. I want to learn more about the environment your characters are in. This story has a tonne of unexpected turns. Your story had me completely engrossed. I had to continue reading because I couldn't help myself hehe
Review till Chapter 14: I found the story to be a little fast-paced and simple at the beginning but that changed very fast. The story has its ups and downs but there is always a twist at the end of the chapters. The characters and the world are built well and dialogues are in a good flow, please keep up the good work. [img=recommend]
Lemme leave everything aside, I loved how you put "The End" as the name of the first chapter 🤣, the storyline is pretty good and how it is progressing and jumping from one plot twist to another shows how much the author is doing hard work, best of luck!🍃
It started off a little rough and fast but once I read a little more it got a lot better. Besides the beginning I love everything overall and I don’t have many complaints to say for this one.
It's probably gonna be clichè if I say this, but your novel was extremely abrupt in the beginning. The plot moved too fast for me. Plus, your characters need more work. Probably find a way to properly integrate them better further on. But that's just my opinion. Liked the novel though. I think it will be a great one. Keep it up! From GrandSky.
I found the story interesting, I recommend you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not. I hope the author continues to write.