Queen Of Slaves

I really love this book... The characters design is wonderful and I can't just stop reading it 😊😊.. P.S I totally love the eye catching title Great job 👍👍

The cover and title is catchy and hooking. Though I want to be frank, the chapter was pretty long and I suffered a bit. Make it 1.5k words per chap. You need to improve your grammar and pacing too. All in all, a good read. Though it needs improvement. Details and narration were jumpy too and skips sometimes. Well, best of luck. Sorry for being blunt. 😩

This is a truly interesting read. The iidea behind the story plot is a concept that feels so original. The storyline in general is quite a pick. Add the book!!!!!!!!!!

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Great start, great story line so far and very creative. The characters are well structured but you need to work on your English so it will be much earlier to understand the story.

I picked this online story with the intention of reading a chapter here and there when I needed a break from something else, maybe stretch it out over a couple of weeks, no hurry whatsoever. Yeah, OK. It completely ruled my day.

For those who are a fan of Korean history fusion, you can pick this book and add it to your library as it has elements that might tingle your inner unnies, oppas, or chingus vibe. The writing still needs improvement from the character introduction and to the story flow because I find it still messy. In my understanding shouldn't a Korean name come with a dash (for a given name) for eg. Kim Yong-Shik? For non-Korean readers, this might help them a lot. Overall, this is a good read and keep up with the good work author 😊.

The story is great with lots of drama in it. The personality of characters are well explained through their actions. There are a few mistakes things which I did find worth mentioning and I hope the author will work on it soon. since this novel seems to be author's first book, the beginner's errors are to be expected but even so I would say it is a good read because the good storyline covers it all. best of luck author

Long chapters with quite of an unstable text structure, you tend to start a new line after a coma, add random capital letters, sometimes the grammar is incorrect. Nonetheless I enjoyed this novel, the start is filled with sorrowful ambience, the overall mood was neat and I did get some empathy for the poor MC and his children

A great storyline. I recommend this book for readers. The story development is really good. The flashback scenes were on par with my expectations. Thumbs up to the author

Good quality of writing. As soon as I saw Joseon, it gave me period kdrama vibes and I love those. I can't wait to follow the story some more.

This is such a unique take on periodic stories and i absolutely love it. The book is going a good pace with everything. And it seems all realistic with the way its going. I really recommend it.

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Nice start, the story seems to be solid, I love the writing and how the world is being built, keep up the good work I'll be following. Just don't drop and keep on writing.

Great story. I mean it feels very real according to the tone it was set. The story twists are unexpected but you will still like to read them. The characters are realistic and they have their own strengths and weaknesses. The plot is really set with a good premise I feel like reading more to know what happens next. Author, you did a really good job.