very good deveoopement of charatcters and story its self. if you read carefully the story sucks you in before you eben reach vhapter 2. amazing work cant wait to read more ♡♡♡
3 years ago
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Zhoa_Fei
Upon reading the synopsis, It didn't really catch my attention. While to the point, it could use more details.
Getting into the story itself:
I actually enjoy Lord Maxwell and Ajax as characters. I am also intrigued on the rank system that this world has.
I will be keeping an eye on this novel for the future. I am interested.
3 years ago
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Bookish_mind
I liked the characters and the description was nice, not usually something I read but I was hooked on this one, and looking forward to read more chapters, your story has great potential keep on writing, awesome 💖💖💖💖
3 years ago
0
Khione1
It's definitely different from my usual reads but I'm glad I gave it a chance. I love the plot and character description. Please keep writing [img=faceslap]
3 years ago
0
Emmanuel_Abraham_2079
The character development is lovely. The narration behind the story is nice. I enjoyed it and the flow is making me want to read more! Please keep writing. I am impressed!
3 years ago
0
Jaison_Arbor
The storyline is appreciative and the way the author has described everything is amazing, the world background and the way the story is progressing with interesting characters make it a good story, good job author.
3 years ago
0
Vivid_Reader
I loved the direction the story is progressing in. The characters are fleshed out, and the world feels lived in. Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Keep up!
3 years ago
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Nadia_M01
I really love this story so far. It has a periodic feel to it. I can almost visualize Lord Maxwell with the description given and he seems like a hottie. Can't wait to read more.
3 years ago
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Robert_Tene_5577
Pretty great take on a transmigration that deals with going into a villain's role.
The author handed the elements pretty well and personally managed to hook me from the first chapter.
Currently on chapter 10.
Waiting for more ~
3 years ago
0
Turquoise24
Great job. Amazingly its interesting unusual to what I usually read. But you done justice with the characters and story, detailed yet attractive. Keep up the good work.
3 years ago
0
Account_nolonger
I loved the story, it's amazing, keep going you have done a great job, the plot is intriguing and I will read this book till the end, loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️
3 years ago
0
HouseOfLee
What an amazing Novel, it’s very well organized and has incredible writing quality! The potential is great in this story and I can’t wait for more!
3 years ago
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JeffyK
Pretty alright. Needs to use less caps, however. War is at hand, though. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
3 years ago
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Pastpassion
Got hooked from the first page
Really nice work
Author has great potential
Y'all should read this
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very good deveoopement of charatcters and story its self. if you read carefully the story sucks you in before you eben reach vhapter 2. amazing work cant wait to read more ♡♡♡
Upon reading the synopsis, It didn't really catch my attention. While to the point, it could use more details. Getting into the story itself: I actually enjoy Lord Maxwell and Ajax as characters. I am also intrigued on the rank system that this world has. I will be keeping an eye on this novel for the future. I am interested.
I liked the characters and the description was nice, not usually something I read but I was hooked on this one, and looking forward to read more chapters, your story has great potential keep on writing, awesome 💖💖💖💖
It's definitely different from my usual reads but I'm glad I gave it a chance. I love the plot and character description. Please keep writing [img=faceslap]
The character development is lovely. The narration behind the story is nice. I enjoyed it and the flow is making me want to read more! Please keep writing. I am impressed!
The storyline is appreciative and the way the author has described everything is amazing, the world background and the way the story is progressing with interesting characters make it a good story, good job author.
I loved the direction the story is progressing in. The characters are fleshed out, and the world feels lived in. Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Keep up!
I really love this story so far. It has a periodic feel to it. I can almost visualize Lord Maxwell with the description given and he seems like a hottie. Can't wait to read more.
Pretty great take on a transmigration that deals with going into a villain's role. The author handed the elements pretty well and personally managed to hook me from the first chapter. Currently on chapter 10. Waiting for more ~
Great job. Amazingly its interesting unusual to what I usually read. But you done justice with the characters and story, detailed yet attractive. Keep up the good work.
I loved the story, it's amazing, keep going you have done a great job, the plot is intriguing and I will read this book till the end, loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️
What an amazing Novel, it’s very well organized and has incredible writing quality! The potential is great in this story and I can’t wait for more!
Pretty alright. Needs to use less caps, however. War is at hand, though. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Got hooked from the first page Really nice work Author has great potential Y'all should read this [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]