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Please read the first 5 chapters I promise you will love it.
"Please love me cold general" Kimla said trying to kiss Song who let go of her feeling surprised by her words.
Kimla's dreams was finally achieved when she step foot into the black elite military camp smiling to herself known to Kimla whose life was about to change with one encounter with the cold arrogant Captin Song. Entangled in a contract marriage where love was not allowed how will Kimla cope when she discovers she has fallen madly in love with the Cold General?.
Read to find out.
Nice outline am already in love with the male lead Captain Song Kang and our beautiful female lead Kimla. Big ups to the author. Can't wait for more updates
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It started out really good and still keeping its momentum. love it, i highly recommend.
The story is really got me tho, it got my interest I'll be in guard for more chapters..
very interesting story nice writing i like the characters overall very nice story. keep it up!
Judging from the cover, maybe this is like a love triangle. Love triangles are always interesting! ❤️❤️❤️
Very interesting and captivating am completely hooked can't wait for more updates
Wow I like who the love between Song and Kimla is growing can't wait for the happy ending
Wow very interesting can't wait for more updates
It's a nice read, that is if you are a fan of slow paced books. it's steady but I do advice to speed up the progress of the characters and also add a bit more suspence.
you really worked hard to create a great book.however, the first few chapters have minor typhos so please do well to correct them
wow nice book good job from author , I'm waiting for more chapters♥️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
The novel is a bit fast paced for me. I think it would be good to show some of Kimla and Song's interaction before the marriage. The narrative is easy to read which is good for readers but it relies a lot on telling (narration). This is not something negative, but I think mixing showing (vivid description of what's happening and how the readers are reacting) to flesh out the scenes and balance the telling, would greatly enrich the narrative and boost reader experience. Also I think it would be better if we get to know the characters and their past, slowly as the story progress. Still good job writing. All the best!
I like how the story works also on how unique it is for me
The story is interesting and has a uniqueness to it . Cant' wait to see more chapters and what happen next .