When a Moron Kid Amour Falls in love with Swayamprajna, He becomes a Caring,Loving, Romantic person but little did he knew the path life will take from that moment,as he begins to fall in love with her, he discovers problems start to arise, will he be able to win her or lose her?
The overall flow of the story is good. I love how you end up putting songs and other stuff in it as it related to real-life scenarios. There are hardly any grammar mistakes and the way you peace the sentences of good....for a beginner that is. I'll be waiting for the newest chaps. Good luck!
Amazing! looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds! wishing you best of luck in your romantic journey! really liked how you started your novel by showing present moment and reverting to past!