Antagonist: Season 1

Antagonist: Season 1

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Author: Violi
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(After sipping shampane from her glass Miss Bertelli Asked ,the black suited guy, Mr. Agusti)

"Tell me, Mr. Agusti, what an 'Antagonist' is in your eyes?"



(Enjoying the appealing moonlit from the balcony, he answered in a nonchalant voice)

"Well, if you've ask me the wordly meaning ,then, a 'nemesis'. A 'villain'. An unwanted 'competitor' ,but, if go deep down in it's meaning ,then, perhaps...."



"Perhaps a true protagonist of their own stories." (Cutting in his words she interfered)



(Not liking the habit of cutting his word in middle he turn to glance at her for the first time)

"That was interesting word game on your part, Miss Bertelli."



"Not 'Miss Bertelli'. You can call me Sancia."



"Do you always offer to call your first name like this to anyone, Miss Sancia." (He said sarcastically)



"Not to anyone, only you. I've a feeling you'll need it a lot in near future. So, It's better that you start practicing early." (she commented confidently)



(After a long pause to notice the woman infront of him thoroughly he replied)

"Right, now, I also got that feeling. See you, then."



"Sure, see you soon"

(Seeing his back getting further and further away. Eventually, she turned to look at the same moonlit scenery he was enjoying earlier and drowned in her own melancholy. )







(Suddenly noticing you .....that's right you!!)

Sancia: Hi, readers!! Are you ready to get lost in nothingness?? Do you dare to cross the boundary of consciousness just to get bounded by them more strongly than before?? If you do, then just join me on my journey!!! And let's get started!!!

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Little_North_Star
Little_North_Star

The book is great, space the paragraphs and increase the chaoter lenght and everything Will be amazing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2 years ago
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Rainandstorm
Rainandstorm

A really interesting and captivating book... I totally love it 😘😘 it really interesting to read

2 years ago
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MatildasBT
MatildasBT

An interesting book, a bit more of a mistery book though. I definetly recommend it!

2 years ago
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Amaza_Rashi
Amaza_Rashi

The background story was good, you just need to properly write the past and the current situation. It kind of confusing for me. And also using the right punctuations, you really need to fix that. ^^

2 years ago
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Arison_T
Arison_T

It's a good story so far, but I would recommend you space your paragraphs by separating when people talk so that your paragraphs aren't too long. This is helpful because for some reason people tend to lose interest when they see a very long paragraph. Keep up the good story hope to read more.

2 years ago
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