You're trying too much.

Elena walked into the slaves quarters majestically and behind her was the head of slaves, Florence. As soon as Elena walked in, everyone of the slaves stood up and bowed their heads as a form of respect to her, since she was the next Luna. Elena looked around, then she looked at the slaves one after the other. When she set her eyes on Winifred, she spoke.

"Can't you see how your other slaves are, do you think you're special than they are or something? Are you forgetting your place in this palace, you human slave? Bow your head and give me the respect I deserve or do I force you to?!" She said sternly to Winifred who stood far away from her. She was at the far end of the room. 

"Are we just supposed to bow till you're done doing whatever you came here to do?" Winifred replied her, which made other slaves to begin to murmur. No one dared to talk back at Elena, but she just did and this wasn't unexpected of her, it was Winifred after all.