The Bloodstained King. The Talented Alchemist. The Veteran Warrior. The Enchantress. The Elven Bard. The Homunculus. The Warlock.
Their destinies collided to bring about the end of Erebus and his shadow creatures. Tasked to collect all seven artifacts of Phoebe, the prophesied heroes embarked on a journey through the lands of Desmos as various discoveries, horrendous monsters, as well as new allies await their arrival.
Seven Artifacts. Seven Heroes. Seven Stories.
A wonderful story so far. I wonder when will the veteran warrior will meet the bloodstain king and the talented alchemist. The world-building gorges as it tells from Viktor's point of view in the past of the majestic kingdom into Layla's point of view of that dusted kingdom after his transportation to her time. A worth reading story 9/10
What the... I'm like... whoa!! Your synopsis 💯 I was hooked just from reading it and I'm afraid to admit it but your writing style is so much better than mine 😅💯. Grammar, descriptions, pace work, perfect ten. At one point I forgot I was reading to give a review. I love the thing you do by starting the first half of the chapter's first sentence in capital letters. It really gives the book this ancient vibe of a kingdom. If the paragraphs could be shortened, it would be better. Your target audience is ML and unlike FL, men's attention span is shorter than that of women. Making them shorter would really boost their morale to read more. I advice you to cut down your chapters to 1k words, so you'll have more chapters. I was heartbroken to find out there were only 8 chapters in this fantastic novel. Overall I love the plot, the characters. I'll never try to get on Viktor's bad side LoL, I like my head right where it is 😆
The novel was pretty great even though there are only a few chapters, it was a very engaging and unique type of story and it's my first time reading a two lead novel so it's pretty different but it's really good at the same time.
The story seems intense and engaging at the same time, it keeps the reader's mind intriguing want to know what will happen now. Also, it's a must-read and does support this novel with all your power stones. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If you want to read a good story, you must skip the first chapter, where the real action begins. A unique and interesting story, with different characters, should captivate you in the first place. The author describes the setting and emotions very well, the cliffhangers at the end make you want to read the next chapter. The botched update schedule and lengthy chapters shouldn't bother here as the story itself is unique and very well presented. Beautiful novel and great grammar from this author. One shouldn't sleep on this story, pov were clear and explained. Actions and doings of every character were reasonable and with purpose. Author, please update more often, WN readers are starving for more. 🖤