2nd Chance the game the world has been waiting for since it’s announcement has Kal hoping it will be his 2nd chance to save him from his troubled life. As a former no life gamer he sets his eyes on this VRMMORPG to distract him from reality and create a new beginning where he can be in control no matter how hard it is to achieve.
It’s new but it seems good if it stays like this it could be up at the top with a lot of other video game based novels the main character seems like he won’t be boring and there seems to be life in each character shown so far everything felt fresh even though its genre is something done before I like the shopkeeper
Very good potential with an interesting storyline. Would like to see some info about Kal and what he looks like, but overall good first chapter.
I know it might be weird to some to not give my own story a 5 star review, but even I know as this is my first story that I have a lot to work on and I plan on working on it. If you like this story enough to give it 5/5 or 1/5 all feedback is appreciated. I just hope you enjoy the story that I love telling and maybe one day I'll give this story a 5/5 myself, but for now its at a 4.6 from me, and I don't know I'm pretty biased.