Code Break HSK

Sci-fi7 Chapters3.8K Views
Author: Takabe
(not enough ratings)
Overview
Table of Contents
Synopsis

A Look In The Past From The Events In The Future.



Code Break follows a Manga script with alot of technical errors, such as grammar and other stuff.



Though however the book itself has a very unique story to it set in a distant future and a distant past, the characters tangled in the fabric of space time.

1 Reviews
(not enough ratings)
Translation Quality
Stability of Updates
Story Development
Character Design
World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Liked
newest
ALittleSickMan
ALittleSickMan

Five stars for motivation. I try to give my most honest opinion: -I didn't understand much of the start -If the chapters are divided by the author like in the first chapter it looks really bad. -It's really confusing and it sounds like the author is trying to set up a kind of mysterious mood, but it really isn't going well. I can't really explain how to do it better but someone who can do it really well is NoWoRRyMaN, I recommend looking into any of his books for reference. -If you aren't using Grammarly already, I recommend you use it. You don't have to pay, just the free version is already good enough I hope something here is useful and incentives you, the author, to write more. The more you write the better it gets.

2 years ago
0