Unfortunately, She Is Mine
He is the most powerful man in Detroit. He has been doting on her and seducing her every step of the way. She thought it was a conspiracy to meet him, but long after, she realized the truth he had been hiding in his heart. She started a life of daytime sweetness, 360 degrees without a dead-end abuse of single dogs, night by men arbitrarily squeezed by the bitter life. It wasn't until one day that she realized that he was more than just the president.
Just as she was about to let go of his wrist, she felt his hand tighten. He pulled her against the wall and pressed her directly against the wall with his body.
"what are your plans?" His eyes were dark, his voice was deep and full of warning.
She stared at him for a long time before speaking, her tone firm, "After last night, I decided to seriously reconsider our relationship..."
He stared at her coldly. "Suddenly so sensible? How much is the price? Divorce?"
In her past life, the divorce had hurt her too much. She raised her face, her bright eyes met his gaze.
She bit her lips lightly, pulled down his neck forcefully, and leaned over to kiss his cold lips.
His eyes widened in shock. He leaned back to avoid her kiss.
The narrative was good, but you still need to work on it. I'm not saying I didn't like it or that it wasn't good; it was good. Your storyline was intriguing, and I enjoyed how you described everything, you've done hard work, but a little hard work more, and your story will be excellent. 🥰
Overall a good read! Your plot is intriguing and the way you set up your characters is good. Keep up the good work!
While the story seems interesting enough, the writing quality is a bit lacking at times, edits could be made to easily make it better, but overall, this seems like a decent book, though im not usually one to read romance novels, so my opinion on it may not be the best.
You need to do more proofreading since there are some mistakes that I already pointed out in the comments section
I am the no romance type of guy but this is quite fun to read. A sure time banger ! Great job in making this feel entertaining. 4.6/ 5 I hope you write more!
I don’t usually read romamce novels, but this one got my attention. i like the character and the plot. 4.4/5 Would recommend
Reading the story is enjoyable and fun. The chapters are crafted to perfection. The author's descriptive skills really put us inside the novel.
your story is unique, but I love it, I hope you complete it. [img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Okay, so the storyline was very interesting. It's been a long time since i read about billionaire genre so it was refreshing. Everything was great, except the writing style. I don't know why but something felt off. I am sorry if it offended you but some dialogues seemed very weird to hear it. Overall, the grammatical errors can be fixed easily. It happened to me too, so it's not a big deal. I wish you all the best. And hope you keep doing better.
Great story with a captivating start. It has a good narrative. I can see a promising plot. The synopsis is great, however, you didn't have to make it that long. A brief and concise synopsis saves the reader a lot of time. I would recommend you shorten your synopsis. The dialogue, if not an important part of the story, is not necessary in the synopsis. Loved the cover. Keep up the good work.
I've only read the synopsis and the first chapter, which makes me want to read it. You have written this story in such a way that it brought a smile to my face while reading it🙆♂️, I admire your creativity and the style of writing the story is also commendable😍👍
The book is very nice and i enjoyed reading every second of it, im simping for both the fl and ml...as this story is my cup of tea.[img=recommend]