district nine
Author: Olashile_Muhammed
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20 years age great federacy was invaded by( aeron ) an alien task force which the military succeeded in keeping the information confiscaticated for a year but later led to war between the faderacy and the earons the following year. the federacy lost millions of comrades due to the unsettling attacks by the aerons. till date anyone who commits a crime would be sent to frontline against the aerons
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After the first chapter, this worlds' interesting. Dealings with advanced technology, military power ecetra, etcetera--if you could reel it in a bit tighter: some proofreading possible, greater introductory of a 'new character', and a bit formatting on paragraphs for us readers. But no, this is good.
SO as far i see the story has good potential. if you are a scifi fan you should give it a try. as for charaacter desingn its good so far, a little more could be added though. there are some gramatical mistakes, so you should take care of that. Keep the good work.
So far...I feel like it has a good idea behind it. on my opinion it's a bit rushed. We have an idea that it's a military society we are dealing with but we can't properly imagine the characters, level of technology, etc. I feel like the author should slow down a bit and properly introduce things to us again ...good idea so far only few chapters have been released at the time of this review so maybe the author may improve in future? let's wait and see
100000 cool story, something i do not get but still making sense. the characters are hmm cool though.. i'll say.. keep it up. cant wait for the next chapter
the plot is lit. but your characters are well developed you need to explain more about the characters.. i love this type of book.. alien, military, advance tech and all. keep it up bro [img=coins][img=exp]