This will be the first time writing something. I'm going to take all genres I like and try force them together.
The MC gets reincarnated into a world of swords and magic.
Start of the novel will be character and setting introduction, and later MC will travel around. R18 chapters will naturally come later... nevermind, the whole story is R18.
First few chapters are just her building her 'character'.
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Harem | NSFW | Domination | Threesome | Foursome | Tentacle | Futa on Female | Female on Futa | Futanari | Incest | Anal | Sex | Choking | Humiliation | Lolicon
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I am open to feedback and hope you enjoy.
Plz keep updating I think this is a good book
the novel is quite entertaining. ......................................................................................................................
This is the kind of story I like. Fantasy stories have what I think is a bad habit of escalating things too quickly. The novel does not have two chapters and there are already evil gods, prophecies, beings that destroy universes, space-time problems, etc. That's almost always an insta drop for me. Exaggeratedly lengthy character customization aside here, no time is wasted trying to complicate everything in search of a cheap explanation for a reincarnation. Not everything has to have a why. There is no suspicious system that talks with emojis. There is no DESTINY. There are no interludes that repeat the same scene over and over again. It just goes to the point and I like that. If I had to mention something, it would be that I would recommend avoiding the use of Flashforwards, I suppose it is a device to create expectations in the future, but it tends to take me a lot out of the story.
Me gusta mucho la historia el personaje el mundo es muy entretenido te deseo buena suerte Te recomiendo ver los comentarios de otras historias similares para aprender
This is a good book and I hope the author did not forget about it
absolutely loving it so far. the only point of criticism I have is some minor inconsistencies in the characters, but even those are just, "more this" or "less that" rather than actually acting against their character. the biggest ones would probably be the naivety of the mc despite being a mob boss in her first life and the disparity between her actual emotionality and old emotionality (supposedly a 30% difference between an emotional person and someone who got bored of running a crime family). the second one is just only a thing because of a single sentence in the character creation part, so you can see how hairsplitting I'm being.
Yeah, This is awesome. Long time no see such good story and everything. Keep it up author. You're the best!!!
This seems like a good story based on the unique tags so keep on writing
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interrsting beginning. all of the major characters until the moment of this review are interesting in their own way. the ratio “Story to +18” is also good. overall great read, its creative and hot when it needs to.
This book is really good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=update][img=update]
finally caught up! as of this review, there are 160 chapters. This story has a SLOW start, but once you get through it, you are in for a good time. A fantasticly fun power fantasy.
Honestly, this book is one of the best thought out books I've ever read, from characterizing to back ground descriptions, this book is absolutely perfect. I truly hope that the author continues to write this book, you go author. The only down side is the updating. The author updating isn't bad but is sorda random. However, from my understanding, the author said that that should get better now that a big exam has passed and with how well the story has been going, I will give them the benefit of the doubt.
great story just wish for more chapters !!
This Novel is Amazing I love author please continue please never drop the novel it is a work of art