An extraordinary man dies in one world and awakes in another. A genius unrivaled in the use of his abilities, abilities that he once thought to be mere fiction. Witness the rise of the Pillar of Strength that shall hold the world up with the godly power that is within all, for he is the one avatar of the six paths reborn upon this world
It has close to no grammatical errors except for a few spelling mistakes. It's a nice take on the quirkless world of mha but nothing new. Though it does have the potential to be a great fanfic. Just try not make the MC too overpowered too early. The pace at which you're going is just right. Great work and please don't drop the fanfic.
great story the only thing that i really hate about it is the word witch that you use instead of which.
not bad, I like itThis is Good Compare to other ff that I have read similarly to this.
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Honestly a great read but after a certain period of time it became all about izuku this izuku that . I get it he loves his brother but it's too much it's borderline psychotic . I want to read more about not how he babysits izuku . Anyway it's great I would definitely recommend giving it a try
Fantastic novel! Basically reborn as madara but the MC is vastly different, I love how he seems so much more human than a lot of other MC’s! Amazing writing as well! Author you might want to change the novels setting to Fanfic from Novel as that way u will get more readers :)
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