Loving the storyline plus good work with that gaiden stuff, you should really publish more often. But it's a work of art, keep up the good work.
a year ago
2
AnimeTagz
The story itself is interesting and the plot is great but i find myself getting put off by writing style. Maybe that's just not my preference but it almost seemed as though i was reading a diary instead of a novel. Lol, not that I'm any better tbh. Keep up the good work and continue to improve.
2 years ago
2
DARK_DEKU
I thought it was My hero academia but it was different and awesome in it's own way
2 years ago
2
LordShivaStories
Great plot and almost very psychological novel. Some spelling error also add some spacing as to not jumble it all up. Great novel though due to the execution and plot
2 years ago
2
Jadeite_Green
Your story was good but, I wanted to share a couple of tip. In chapter 2, it might be helpful to add some spacing for better readability, and I noticed a few spelling errors. Keep up the good work!
2 years ago
2
TempestGee
It is a really good fantasy novel with a good plot fr. bring more chapters!!!!
2 years ago
2
Annabelle_Kate
this is the best story I have ever read I can't believe this was done by a 15 year old
2 years ago
2
UniqueKarma
My best work ever, i just hope it becomes a success like solo leveling, the sheild hero, Doki Doki literature club and the rest. please i need the readers help for that.
And also thank you for reading and i hope you enjoyed it, and also dont forget to drop your reveiws so that i would know if i should make some adjustments or not. And again thanks.
And be easy with your comments, i am just a 15 year old dude
2 years ago
2
HouseOfLee
Interesting story and interesting start, I was immersed into the novel fairly quickly, it’s a great read. Keep up the good work!
2 years ago
1
Pinkyprincess
Reminds me of an anime style story! Well done, author! Hooking me right from the first chapter!
2 years ago
1
the_idyllic_scribe
the dtory is very good so far. Also ver inreredting, and surprisingly well written
2 years ago
1
Sinadin_2ndth
You have a good potential. Go on, don't lose hope and keep on updating.
2 years ago
1
AustinAK
i love the storyline keep it up🔥 I’ a really big fan
2 years ago
1
Sweet_SourKiwi
this is so good, I can feel the passion on each words and its very well written, the story is nice, it's not the genre I used to read but this quite nice to read it, I'm curious how the next chapters are, keep it up babe 😘😘
2 years ago
1
Mountain_Yogi
Superb narrative, focusing nearly exclusively on the mind. There is an error in the spelling, and some extra spacing would help organize the text better. Nonetheless, a great read due to the quality of the writing and the intriguing plot.
Loving the storyline plus good work with that gaiden stuff, you should really publish more often. But it's a work of art, keep up the good work.
The story itself is interesting and the plot is great but i find myself getting put off by writing style. Maybe that's just not my preference but it almost seemed as though i was reading a diary instead of a novel. Lol, not that I'm any better tbh. Keep up the good work and continue to improve.
I thought it was My hero academia but it was different and awesome in it's own way
Great plot and almost very psychological novel. Some spelling error also add some spacing as to not jumble it all up. Great novel though due to the execution and plot
Your story was good but, I wanted to share a couple of tip. In chapter 2, it might be helpful to add some spacing for better readability, and I noticed a few spelling errors. Keep up the good work!
It is a really good fantasy novel with a good plot fr. bring more chapters!!!!
this is the best story I have ever read I can't believe this was done by a 15 year old
My best work ever, i just hope it becomes a success like solo leveling, the sheild hero, Doki Doki literature club and the rest. please i need the readers help for that. And also thank you for reading and i hope you enjoyed it, and also dont forget to drop your reveiws so that i would know if i should make some adjustments or not. And again thanks. And be easy with your comments, i am just a 15 year old dude
Interesting story and interesting start, I was immersed into the novel fairly quickly, it’s a great read. Keep up the good work!
Reminds me of an anime style story! Well done, author! Hooking me right from the first chapter!
the dtory is very good so far. Also ver inreredting, and surprisingly well written
You have a good potential. Go on, don't lose hope and keep on updating.
i love the storyline keep it up🔥 I’ a really big fan
this is so good, I can feel the passion on each words and its very well written, the story is nice, it's not the genre I used to read but this quite nice to read it, I'm curious how the next chapters are, keep it up babe 😘😘
Superb narrative, focusing nearly exclusively on the mind. There is an error in the spelling, and some extra spacing would help organize the text better. Nonetheless, a great read due to the quality of the writing and the intriguing plot.