Story seems well thought through. Characters aren't given much description(lead characters are featureless, others are described fantastically, but one would think that the main protagonists and antagonists would be described properly). Overall- good writing quality. Enjoyed the twists and progression of story.
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Story seems well thought through. Characters aren't given much description(lead characters are featureless, others are described fantastically, but one would think that the main protagonists and antagonists would be described properly). Overall- good writing quality. Enjoyed the twists and progression of story.
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