The Fantastic Five.

It's a wonderful narrative that teenagers who are just starting to make friends would be able to relate to. It's admirable that you had the guts to attempt such a premise in your work. Strongly suggested. To pass the time, read a slice-of-life novel like this one. I really appreciate it when you develop characters because it's simple to read and extremely simple for the brain to comprehend. I am reminded of my youth by it. I appreciate the book.

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This novel is really well-made and easy to understand. The story is different from other books like it, which makes it interesting and fun to read. The way the author writes is amazing and brings the characters to life.

This is a great slice of life novel! It got good characters, good pace, and great overall writing quality! I think of making chapter more lengthy Good luck!

It is a quite nice and understandable novel... 😘 the story is different from the novels of this genre and it is interesting, I will be waiting for more chapters

wow I love the book so much I wish I could see more

Came from the forum. It’s my first time doing a quick review., so forgive me if it sounded off. From an overall stand point, I could say you nailed the character. Lively, relatable, alive, those words can be used to describe them. However, I haven’t read everything yet, so I can’t comment on the dynamic. Although they’re basic, they work. Next is the writing, you keep it simple, and i think it’s great that you do that. This kind of story definitely benefit from that. Very easy to take in. Development? It’s there, but very few chapters( Ijust don’t invest on paid chapters anyway, for all stories too) make it hard to judge whether if doing it good or not. Just my opinion though. For Stability, I’m gonna give it a 2 for now since I wasn’t there when the update was constant. But if it’s back to 2 months ago, I think a 4-star would better fit your story. Last but not least, the background. Hmm, what to say. It’s great. Thanks to it not being a fantasy world, many details can be ommitted easily without consequence. And that means info dump hardly exist, that’s what I feel about this. Wish you luck in the future, fellow author!

"Kay that's an awesome novella you've got there,but I think you focused more on one of the mc at the beginning, maybe you could like change the pov more frequently.This is in my top ten pov novels

it is definitely an interesting story worth reading but yet somehow I was surprised at how the author ended their chapters. this may only be an early chapter thing since I've only read five chapters; but keep up the good work.

I must say, I am thoroughly impressed with your writing style! Your story has a great flow . Well done! Keep up the good work

Not really a fan of this genre but good character design and world background.

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I usually am not a big fan of laid back or slice of life stories, but THIS is gOOood😩✨ Very well written and has good pacing👌 And I like how every one from the big five has their own unique personality and style (≧∀≦)ゞ Viri Gud!ヾ(≧▽≦*)o

It's an amazingly good read with lots of good slice of life moments ! Easy to interpret and the characters are life like...will be awaiting more chapters from the author.