Should I continue?

Hello everyone, Good_Doggo2001 here.

I'd like to inquire for your opinion whether I should continue this book or not. I am planning to write another book if this one fails.

Not only that, I would like to hear everyone's opinion on the story so far and tell me if the writing is good or bad. If the writing is good, then thank you very much, and if the writing is bad, then tell me on what should I do in order to fix the story and make it worth reading.

As for the characters of the story, I'd like to hear your opinion on them too. I know there is the third MC, but set it aside for now and let's focus about Saga and Ceobe. Were they written right or not? Do they lack personalities or not?

I need some reassurance so I can continue writing this story.

That is all, thank you.