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I rewrote most of the sex scenes again because I wasn't please with how I wrote them, they didn't seem passionate to me that's why. so I hope you like the rewritten version

Hi dear readers I just wanted to announced that I rewrote the sex scenes and some stuff because I forgot to add some important plot info. Also I didn't like how the sex scenes were written because when I thought hard and pondered about then it's not a situation I'd like. Thus the story is still tradegy but it's also going to be slice of life and comedic.

So I hope you like the rewrite. I didn't rewrite everything just some parts. So I'd advice my readers to reread the story from Fown's part.