NOT PART OF FOAH - Update 20250316

 To put things shortly, I've had a LOT going on in my life up until late and have recently had my writing regressed to a complete halt for about the last... what, 7-9 months? More recently, I've been coming across motivation and have found it within myself to do more than just continue. So, to that end, I'm going to re-read my works, adjust what I don't like once more, and push onward to write better. That being said, there a few things I want to mention right off the bat that I'm going to change. First to the plate, is the Spriggan scene. If you read it, you know what I'm talking about. If not, don't worry about it. It's going to be removed. It's unnecessary and it doesn't fit there right now. (The reason I had it there was because I was tired of writing scenes in dungeons and didn't want to move in the simple, obvious direction, which I now know have the mental fortitude to accomplish.) After that, is the troll-fighting scene. Something's wrong with it, I know it, it doesn't flow in the way I want it to, so I'm going to review it maybe 37 times and decide on something to do. Past that are my planned chapters, which I have locked away in a secret hidden file folder in my phone because I don't want to look at it, despite knowing exactly how I want it, and knowing I can 100% cook with them. All this being said, I'm going to go over my whole work so far and assess and adjust. Any and all constructive advice is appreciated, so feel free to point out things that could be written better. I have no editor, so you guys are my only hope. :)