Please Shower me with tips.
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Magdalene lay on her bed her mind thinking of the poison that was threatening her whole being.
She stood up and walked to the window side and sighed. Ever since they returned from the temple her mind had been all over the place even though Lucas told her to not worry. She sighed because she couldn't sleep.
After watching out for several minutes she went back to the bed and lay on it. Magdalene didn't know how long the turning and tossing took before she finally fell asleep.
"Aaaaaaaah! Magdalene yelled as someone lounged a knife at her.
"Annabelle what are you doing. I'm you sister, why do you want me dead" Magdalene screamed at the girl who was behaving like a maniac.
The girl didn't listen but removed another knife from her sleeves and threw it at Magdalene who narrowly dodged it
"Stop this madness at once!" She yelled angrily at Annabelle.