Feeling uncomfortable
In a beautiful shiny day:
Inside the church- At arround 12.30 pm, the priest is ready to start the wedding ceremony. Bride and groom both are standing infront of him in their beautiful wedding costumes. Both are looking amazing. There are many people gathered to be the witness of their special day. Everyone was smiling and whispering happily.
After a moment they all heard the words of the priest as they all become excited.
The priest looked straight in front of him and started to say: Today, we all are here to witness the wedding of Richard Anderson and Eliana Gomez. Now the ceremony shall begin.
"Do you, Mr Richard Anderson, take Miss Eliana Gomez to be your wedded wife, to have and to hold from this day forward for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to have and to charish, till death makes you apart."
Richard Anderson: "I do."
He don't take even a little time to reply after the priest words. Anyone who present there could tell, how much he was waiting for this date.
Then the priest started to say again: "Do you, Miss Eliana Gomez....."
Suddenly he was interrupted by the heavy sounds of thunders. Within a minute uncountable water started to drop from the sky in a form of rain. Everyone got startled by hearing the sudden thunderstorms in a clean and shiny day.
Eliana Gomez, who was standing right in front of the priest started to feel even more uncomfortable after hearing this all. She became lost minded as she heard the sound from the deep of her heart- "Even God is not sure about your marriage Eliana. Are you really sure about your decision? Why it's feel like, this is the arrival of the upcoming Storms in your life!"
She closed her eyes to sweep her all negative thoughts. But just the moment she closed her eyes, his face flashed in her mind. Her throat become dry and ears become hot. Her whole body started to tremble in her nervousness.
She immediately opened her eyes and pressed her left upper chest by her hand where she could feel her unsteady heart beat. Her forehead covered with full of sweat as she took deep breath and murmured in her mind: Calm down Eli.... You are not guilty for anything.... They all should bear their punishment for their deeds.... You can't get weak by thinking about it again and again... You had just fight for getting justice nothing else.... Moreover this place is far away from them.... Everything is over now.... Let's move on.... Everything will be okay.
Although she tried very hard but no matter how much she tried, her heart was still in chaos when she heard the priest words again.
Priest: Do you, Miss Eliana Gomez, take Mr Richard Anderson to be your wedded husband, to have and to hold from this day forward for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to have and to charish, till death makes you apart."
Even the weather become worsen outside but all the presented people are still as excited as before. They all looked at Eliana impatiently who don't reply yet.
Eliana: Ohh God, why I'm feeling so uneasy? It's like something is wrong... Something is missing...Why my heart is not responding positively? Why I'm hesitating to reply a simple answer? My best friend, the person I have crush from my childhood, the person I like the most, the person who has always fitted in all of my demands is just standing in front of me but what the hell is wrong with me? Why am I delaying to accept him as my life partner? Why am I feeling so uncomfortable?
She come out from her wild thoughts because of a touch on her shoulder as she looked up and noticed Richard's questioning gaze.
Eliana smiled faintly and muttered in her mind: Enough Eli... Enough is enough... What nonsense are you thinking at this time? This is your special day so just enjoy... Yeah I have to do it.
She took some deep breaths and looked at the priest then said: "I......."
"SHE DIDN'T", before she could complete, every one heard a cold voice from behind. Everyone looked back in their amusement as they don't have any idea what's going on but Eliana shivered just to hear the familiar voice all of a sudden. She can't expect him even in her wildest dreams at this time in this place. An unknown fear appeared in her heart as she slowly turned back to see the source of the voice.
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Author: So guys, this is the first chapter of my second book "A LOVE was better till unformed". This story is totally different from my previous work and as per my guesses it would be totally different from each and every story. After being encouraged by some of my precious and dearest readers, I thought to write a story again.
Feel free to put your honest feedback about the chapter as I really wanted to know if I should continue it or not. Thank you.
****By Priyanka****