My Vampire System (Next Generation)
Earth had faced it's great challenge and had over come it with the sacrifice and blood of selected few
now earth had been reborn from its ash like a Phoenix being reborn and with it comes the trouble on a new beginning
Earth is facing.......no, the universe is facing the treat far bigger that what they had faced before and the hero of all time and his fateful comrades are all gone
leaving the weight of this new threat in the shoulders of a younger generation.
Althas Talen most mount up to the responsibility placed on his and his comrades shoulder as they stand up to defend the milky way galaxy from doom.
I'm initially sorry for taking down the former write up, but I promised this one would not be disappointing and its like a sequel of the original novel.
Grammer, wrong sentence structures, and sentences that make no real sense and make you play sherlock holmes to try and find out what the Author might have meant. I tried to at least correct some obvious mistakes and commented under the paragraphs but gave up after some time and instead left a comment on a paragraph with some writing tips, that will hopefully help him/her. People who hate bad grammar and can not excuse it and hate stories filled with it, then this fanfic is not for you. Author, I hope you read this and maybe try to follow the tips and improve your mistakes. Anyway, I will probably not read further and just simply save it in the Library and wait if the Author makes some updates to his already existing chapters and corrects the mistakes. Till then good bye
Moooooore please!! Write more on these like you said
A lot of spelling and grammar mistakes but not any major ones so its pretty easy to guess but besides that its a pretty good read. Author might want to make a discord server for people to help him proofread
don't have much to say because am the author, all thanks to jks, this book is born in existence all I can tell the readers is, the book gets better as it moves on the carefree over powered mc, as he thinks himself to be, found himself in a trickery situation where he is no different from the original mc situation lastly, please don't mind the typos in the novel, I apologized before hand, o would find a way to fix them or get someone to help me out till then do enjoy the book and don't forget to vote, Rate and leave comments thanks.
Great story and content. Can't wait for the rest of the story. Quinn needs to fix the growing disarray. Everyone should get this and you will be hooked immediately. Please update the story so all can enjoy it's content.
good read make more chapters so we can read more
I have completed reading My vampire system . Please continue the story and bring back Quin Talen.
It's a nice fic. Author has done a great job portraying MVS world. Although it has a lot of minor mistakes with grammar, spelling mistake etc, it's still easy to immerse. Friendly advice author, if you find it hard to correct those mistakes use free AI tools. Advanced writing AI will enhance the quality. Hope it helps. 😊
very epic moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
This look good. even tho i haven't read the novel vampire system. also have you read My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires ? if yes then will you consider making a ff
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