Major Story Overhaul and Re-Work

It has come to my attention that my story seems to have a bit of inconsistencies and such. And because I want to give my readers nothing but 100% of my hard-work when creating this story, I have decided to do some major planning and re-work. That includes even going back on some chapters and fixing errors, mistakes, and lore stuffs that make no sense. I want this story to touch readers and feel alive, and any sort of reduncancies will ultimately ruin what I am trying to create here.

A story.

Not a cash grab, not a hobby, not an escapist fantasy; but a story one can relate to. A story that pulls the heart and makes the mouth stretch into a smile. So, for the next 2 weeks, there will not be a new chapter. But fear not, by the time I have finished; there will be a confirmed 3-4 new chapters already done. Here's what you can expect from this OVERHAUL and re-work:

- Lore fixes

- Less exposition dumps

-More action

- More descriptive writing

- Less spelling mistakes and such

- Re-worked characters

Thank you all for reading this work of mine, it means a lot to me.

Love, Mars 🐻