For now one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read, I like that the MC goes straight to what he set out to do, killing off important characters in the story taking into account the consequences but being smart enough to hide it, what I like most is the fact that the author doesn't lengthen the plot trying not to kill off the MC's obstacles just because they're from the main cast.
a year ago
8
Lemao_Enamsembilan
I can give this story 4* for how unique and fresh it is. But story is only one perspective. Like beside kidnapped Naruto the MC killed the genin of team 8, which is the heir of their respective clans but there is no reaction of them in this story. Surely, Konoha in turmoil after that. Oh well, it is just my opinion.
it would be good fanfiction if the author show general perspective. If continue like this, just edit the summary with self insert MC. It was interesting at first but I won't continue to read this.
Thank you for the translation.
9 months ago
3
DaoistcaqwL5
here is my review after reading this novel till the end(yes, it ended few days ago)
power system:Really interesting system that have ties to puppetry and uses of powers from other series(won't spoil much here)
MC: He is rare MC who is cold, smart and efficientit focused in his way where nothing stop him (except for his lack of power at times). Unlike other MC of similar persona, however he truly never changed and developed an anti-Hero savior complex and is true to his very very selfish goal (yes, he is an outright villain)
world:The worldbuilding is pretty much the same except with one unqiue spin.(it become essential to his goal)
Does it have boruto element: No...no, like you would be surprised how much MC is focus on his goal
writing:Pretty good
story:Its unqiue enough to read it and see how MC grows stronger. The end felt a bit quick but it remain true how MC acts so I felt it was good.
overall:Just give it a try, it's a good read among the sea of content
6 months ago
2
Shinobi069
por favor vuelve a subir harry potter galegold
7 months ago
0
SungHye
Até agora achei muito interessante sua fanfic.... geralmente o pessoal faz um copiar colar, são raros os autores que constroem o mundo de uma forma diferente, uma pena que tem pouco capitulos, espero que não abandone e nem force um harem, varias mulheres é bom de se ver em um anime mas chato de se ler em uma historia....
a year ago
0
Troy34
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
For now one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read, I like that the MC goes straight to what he set out to do, killing off important characters in the story taking into account the consequences but being smart enough to hide it, what I like most is the fact that the author doesn't lengthen the plot trying not to kill off the MC's obstacles just because they're from the main cast.
I can give this story 4* for how unique and fresh it is. But story is only one perspective. Like beside kidnapped Naruto the MC killed the genin of team 8, which is the heir of their respective clans but there is no reaction of them in this story. Surely, Konoha in turmoil after that. Oh well, it is just my opinion. it would be good fanfiction if the author show general perspective. If continue like this, just edit the summary with self insert MC. It was interesting at first but I won't continue to read this. Thank you for the translation.
here is my review after reading this novel till the end(yes, it ended few days ago) power system:Really interesting system that have ties to puppetry and uses of powers from other series(won't spoil much here) MC: He is rare MC who is cold, smart and efficientit focused in his way where nothing stop him (except for his lack of power at times). Unlike other MC of similar persona, however he truly never changed and developed an anti-Hero savior complex and is true to his very very selfish goal (yes, he is an outright villain) world:The worldbuilding is pretty much the same except with one unqiue spin.(it become essential to his goal) Does it have boruto element: No...no, like you would be surprised how much MC is focus on his goal writing:Pretty good story:Its unqiue enough to read it and see how MC grows stronger. The end felt a bit quick but it remain true how MC acts so I felt it was good. overall:Just give it a try, it's a good read among the sea of content
por favor vuelve a subir harry potter galegold
Até agora achei muito interessante sua fanfic.... geralmente o pessoal faz um copiar colar, são raros os autores que constroem o mundo de uma forma diferente, uma pena que tem pouco capitulos, espero que não abandone e nem force um harem, varias mulheres é bom de se ver em um anime mas chato de se ler em uma historia....
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
Love the story plz continue