Origin:A voyage
" A simple act of kindness can lead you and your loved ones to the path of destruction "
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Around the Eighteenth century, India was the hub of the world's major trades such as spices, metals, cotton, and diamonds. It was known as the land of spice.
It was not just business but correspondingly attracted explorers with its massive landscape and hidden mysteries, challenging them to find out what was hidden centuries ago from the modern world.
Lured by these characteristics An explorer named Lord Leoandro Hughes determined to visit the deepest area of one of its kingdoms but little did he know, it was going to open up some old wounds and a new chapter of his life.
Years later, There was a girl born in the same kingdom named Ramya. She was only three years old when she lost her mother due to an unknown disease. His father was a royal physician but still incapable of saving his wife.
After his wife's death, he takes care of Ramya all by himself. Now she was seventeen and his father wanted to find a suitable match for her.
He, himself was fighting an incurable disease over the years, and now he was weak and on the verge of death thus he wanted his daughter to get married to a respectable family.
But wherever he goes for his daughter's hand, the families rejected him politely and this infuriated and worried him with every passing day.
There was a rumour attached to Ramya's birth. The villagers talk behind their backs in a hushed tone. However, it never bothered the father-daughter duo and they lived their life happily.
Her father knew about it and was determined to take the secret to his grave. He always made sure his daughter remained unaware of the facts that were easily observable to others.
But on the other hand, Ramya was a curious child. She did not want to be a physician like her father or a performer and housewife like her mother.
She wanted to explore the world and wished to know everything about it. She did not know where she got these desires but they were there, crawling under her skin, itching her to take action.
Like her mother, her father also left her alone in this world at the age of eighteen but the noise of whispers was still there and the fact was, she couldn't ignore them this time.
To ease her curiosity, she made a big decision to leave her birthplace and find her ORIGIN, but little did she know curiosity killed the cat......
( Warning: This is a period story and the time was roamed around the eighteen century, please keep this in presumption before reading it)
So the author here, if you have any complaints or feedback..feel free to write them down here..I'll like to answer them back. Criticized the book and work in every way possible .....your suggestions are always welcomed A mediocre author ...
The arc and the setting of the book are quite interesting...I whole love to know what the author has in his/her head and what imagination he/she provides us further but till now I read it's an interesting ride. Best of luck author ...
The world-building is amazing in this book. I love the Leo character and wish to know what happens next. Let's say it a pretty much a lovely ride of emotions... Great author ...
I like the storyline, characters, and setting. I would love to know how far It could be taken and in which direction the story would develop...with these interesting characters..all the best dear author....
Three chapters and im hooked i really like leo and HIs characters, im gonna read and find out more[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
This story is really good, I love how the Author sets the book, it's all about mystery and I love it. The grammar is lovely. One thing I'm really impressed about is the way the Author began the story line, it gives you this feeling of imagination. All I can say is good luck Author, I'd love to read more chapters.
I love this book and i love how its getting 5stars, i love the premise and i feel like Im on fhe ship with them, id say its a good read, no grammatical error, interesting Plots and amAzing writing
This is so far a very interesting story l can tell.. There are a lot of mystery and as a mystery story lover l can tell that this gonna be one of my favourite story... I know this author and how beautiful she writes...l loved the ML Leonardo.. he has a spark in him.. The world background is well decorated amd the grammar mistake is very rare... So if anyone likes to read mystery novel with a lot of suspense in it then this is a highly recommended book... All the best my friend ❤️❤️
What a great read the more I read the more I can see your potential
The story is well-paced, with a nice setting. Author's writing is really descriptive and the few chapters that I read were full of "awww 🥰" moments. Until now I am on the England part of things only, and have not yet reached India. Hoping to see how the author unfolds this promising drama that she promised in the synopsis. Keep up the good work author 🙌
The writing quality is on another level entirely not to mention the story development and characters designing. All these just left me agape at the nice curved piece of work.✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
This was written well and I love the main characters. I wished the synopsis tells us more though. It may just be me, but web novel readers seem to like more specific synopsis?
Set in the year 1820, the book will immerse you with a sense of wonder and deep emotions. The main protagonist, Leo is filled with a somber past, adding a layer of emotional instability. The author masterfully portrays Leo's emotions, allowing the readers to judge and empathize with him. While there are a few spelling mistakes, the overall grammar and writing quality is good and the impeccable attention to detail creates an enthralling reading experience. You're doing great and best of luck!
The story is intriguing, beautiful plot and wordbuilding
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